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Painted by me; Eve Roper 2016

Rainbow skies, ocean current withdrew. Girl's pert swirls, soft unbound hair, where pearls shelled mollusk would dare to clasp its curls. Radiance eyes special gentle blue. Three feet exhilarating handful. Sweet, inescapable mud stain cheeks; cuteness with endless hugs, sunshine streaks, briny wave tears drop flow buckets full. Barefoot, tattered, and grass sully knees. Magpie, explores never says goodbye. Cheesecake berries-double bubble sky. Pink My Little Ponies perched on trees. Night pledges stardust dreams and fairies. Sleep little angel, in star full clouds, stories with lullabies among crowds of flowers, hummingbirds, and bunnies. Gnomes tease chuckles and granted wishes, rainbow snow cones, cherry lollipops. Wake to orange sunrise final drops and endless love, bear hugs, and kisses. 2/16/2018 Poetry Contest: Enclosed Rhyme Sponsored by: Emile Pinet

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Date: 3/5/2019 12:33:00 PM
Hello Eve, I have enjoyed this poem about the little girl. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 2/25/2019 8:47:00 PM
Lovely painting, Eve. What a LOVEly poem overflowing with LOVE. Beautifully delightful, Eve. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 2/22/2019 4:40:00 PM
Such a charming poem, Eve, (and painting) about this sweet girl (perhaps your granddaughter)? Congratulations on your nice placement in Mark's contest, and best wishes for the next. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/22/2019 6:35:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your talents, your painting and poem. God bless you.
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Date: 2/21/2019 4:16:00 PM
What a gifted artist you are Eve, both with pen and brush!
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Date: 2/21/2019 3:40:00 PM
this is so enchanting. It's my favorite so far on the list. Congrats on your nice win.
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Date: 2/21/2019 3:23:00 PM
Eve, the more I read this the more I love it! And that's before I saw your painting! Very nice, indeed, and a Fav for me. Congratulations on your win on Mile 19 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest! Thank you so much for supporting my contests. By continuing to place in the contests you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
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Date: 2/16/2019 9:45:00 AM
Sweet ending and another great painting..
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Date: 2/16/2019 6:09:00 AM
WOW! Eve this is great!
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Date: 2/16/2019 1:48:00 AM
A beautiful enclosed rhyme Eve; I can picture this darling, and it makes me smile.
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Date: 2/16/2019 12:44:00 AM
Wonderful Eve, best wishes...
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