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God is the creator We are the created Emptiness the crater So our heart’s agitated The void of no-thingness Incomprehensible to mind Upon melding with oneness All our fears are left far behind Here, in womb of existence There’s nothing we need to do Relax oh lama, be thou not tense Rejoice as bliss throbs within renew 12-February-2022

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Date: 2/15/2022 2:18:00 PM
Ah, so delicately and sweetly penned!
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Date: 2/15/2022 7:16:00 PM
Thank you, dear Caren!
Date: 2/12/2022 8:06:00 PM
When 'emptiness craters,' 'oh llama be not tense!' Words of wisdom, Seeker. Thanks, gw
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Date: 2/12/2022 8:29:00 PM
Lama the monk often confused with llama the animal
Date: 2/11/2022 8:13:00 PM
Is that a llama or a lama or como se llama?
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Date: 2/12/2022 1:38:00 AM
Lama as in hermit

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