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Carrie Richards

Joy In the Morning

morning dew scatters,
  as hummingbirds fan their wings....
      a breath of fresh air

friendly rivalry
  between humming birds and bees...
     flowers beg notice

Copyright © Carrie Richards | Year Posted 2012

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

May 1, 2012 at 10:43 AM

This is so lovely Carrie :D I especially enjoyed your first haiku here :D and that photo is cute! Thank you so much for passing by my poem :D I hope all is well with you and hugs to you, sweet Carrie :D

Andrea Dietrich

April 22, 2012 at 10:55 PM

Oh, I love how you included the bees into the picture at the end there. CUTE.

April 22, 2012 at 9:14 AM

beautiful haiku, carrie. i chuckled at your action man comments, lol

April 22, 2012 at 7:49 AM

Joy is the perfect word for these wonderful Haikus' good luck Carrie. harry

April 21, 2012 at 1:10 PM

Carrie a great entree for the contest. good luck and have a great weekend..David

April 21, 2012 at 9:55 AM

Nice imagery here by you Carrie.Best wishes in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 21, 2012 at 7:10 AM

This was a breath of fresh air Carrie, thank you. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 21, 2012 at 7:11 AM

Wish you good luck in contest!

Andrea Dietrich

April 20, 2012 at 9:33 PM

very pretty. I particularly like the image of the first one.

April 20, 2012 at 8:34 PM

The first stanza got me.

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