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we seek joy expansion love offers a sneak peek when head-heart meld in elation bliss by osmosis seeps through vibration heart keeps we see attention sways how then may we be free until fears and desires we lay present here now just be in silence pray hearts plea stretch time our presence still to one hand clapping chime as bliss currents voids within fill love throb the healing thyme we do Gods will heart climbs thoughts slow cease to reckon God leads and we follow caress of love divine beckons vaporised self mellow love our beacon heart glows 26-May-2021 Heptastich poetry contest Sponsor: William Kekaula syllable count 2-4-6-8-6-4-2

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Date: 6/12/2021 2:04:00 PM
Unseeking Seeker, congrats on your wonderful win with this spiritual write! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 6/12/2021 9:31:00 PM
Thank you, Kim!
Date: 6/9/2021 9:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Seeker. Wonderful journey of the seeking heart knowing its need for God. This is wonderfully crafted. Love the repetition at the end of each stanza illustrating the heart's pilgrimage. Blessings to you.
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Date: 6/9/2021 9:21:00 AM
Thank you Sam!
Date: 6/9/2021 4:26:00 AM
Fantastically done, Seeker:-) Heartiest congratulations!
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Date: 6/9/2021 5:02:00 AM
Thank you, Edward!
Date: 6/9/2021 3:28:00 AM
Deep Spiritual poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/9/2021 5:03:00 AM
Thanks Chris!
Date: 6/9/2021 1:54:00 AM
Well written for your placement, Seeker.
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Date: 6/9/2021 3:20:00 AM
Thank you, Jenna! Happy you dropped by
Date: 6/9/2021 1:34:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Delightful and delighting from the start til the end. God bless you.
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Date: 6/9/2021 3:20:00 AM
Thank you, Beata! Happy it resonates with your heart
Date: 6/8/2021 11:09:00 PM
Wow, (now that I see it) a photo finish topping your brilliant piece, US, an amazing heart-to-heart endeavor, I am grateful for your participation and my compliments on your placement my friend, Aloha!
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Date: 6/8/2021 11:46:00 PM
Delighted, William! Thank you for hosting this interesting format
Date: 5/28/2021 5:06:00 AM
This is an overwhelming brilliant poem, US:) well done:)
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Date: 6/8/2021 11:07:00 PM
Thank you, Jo!
Date: 5/26/2021 8:17:00 AM
Wonderful writing. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
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Date: 5/26/2021 8:44:00 AM
Thanks for your good wishes, Regina

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