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Joy Eternal

we seek joy expansion love offers a sneak peek when head-heart meld in elation bliss by osmosis seeps through vibration heart keeps we see attention sways how then may we be free until fears and desires we lay present here now just be in silence pray hearts plea stretch time our presence still to one hand clapping chime as bliss currents voids within fill love throb the healing thyme we do Gods will heart climbs thoughts slow cease to reckon God leads and we follow caress of love divine beckons vaporised self mellow love our beacon heart glows 26-May-2021 Heptastich poetry contest Sponsor: William Kekaula syllable count 2-4-6-8-6-4-2
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Merryman Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 2:04 PM
Unseeking Seeker, congrats on your wonderful win with this spiritual write! Blessings, Kim M
Seeker Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 9:31 PM
Thank you, Kim!
Kauffman Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 9:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Seeker. Wonderful journey of the seeking heart knowing its need for God. This is wonderfully crafted. Love the repetition at the end of each stanza illustrating the heart's pilgrimage. Blessings to you.
Seeker Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 9:21 AM
Thank you Sam!
Ibeh Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 4:26 AM
Fantastically done, Seeker:-) Heartiest congratulations!
Seeker Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 5:02 AM
Thank you, Edward!
Alex Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 3:28 AM
Deep Spiritual poem. Congratulations!
Seeker Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 5:03 AM
Thanks Chris!
Logan Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 1:54 AM
Well written for your placement, Seeker.
Seeker Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 3:20 AM
Thank you, Jenna! Happy you dropped by
Agustin Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 1:34 AM
Wow! Congrats! Delightful and delighting from the start til the end. God bless you.
Seeker Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 3:20 AM
Thank you, Beata! Happy it resonates with your heart
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 11:09 PM
Wow, (now that I see it) a photo finish topping your brilliant piece, US, an amazing heart-to-heart endeavor, I am grateful for your participation and my compliments on your placement my friend, Aloha!
Seeker Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 11:46 PM
Delighted, William! Thank you for hosting this interesting format
Daniel Avatar
May 28, 2021 at 5:06 AM
This is an overwhelming brilliant poem, US:) well done:)
Seeker Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 11:07 PM
Thank you, Jo!
Mcintosh Avatar
May 26, 2021 at 8:17 AM
Wonderful writing. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
Seeker Avatar
May 26, 2021 at 8:44 AM
Thanks for your good wishes, Regina
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