Joy Elaine Wellington

Joy, they named for themselves, the future's blind
Oyster to drink your sand. In salt tides love rises
Yearning to part the twinning shell and there resign.

Empress of the emerald seas, my ship for rich prizes
Listed its name, cargoing only your pure laden weight
Anchorless against the blustering report of bad winds.
I desired you alone, and for you I you alone I freight
Nature's nagging Testament jettisoned among the fins
Eternal glimpse of glee. O how my ship prized your worth

Well in tons delicious of my dreams, your sweet waters
Ecstatic upon the plunging foray of my keel, port
Leaning through tempting triangles, the pirate pesters
Lack speed's pursuit, and through doldrums I evade
Incessant wrongs, until your wild waves wanton decree
Numbed wind and sail in me. Flirtingly you delayed
Giving my ship to port, and then soon abandoned me  
Tideless in a salt bog of tears where I logged deceit
Once in a while I come down to the sea, the old receipt
Nested in my mastless fingers, to wail my loss in you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/14/2009 2:40:00 PM
many symbols all leading to one conclusion-the empress of the seas,the empress of your heart,and i love the last verse-to wail my loss in you-lovely - ur a great writer and artist-----charma
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Date: 4/14/2009 2:25:00 PM
Incredible L'nass.... a real work of poetic art ! I bow before and tip my hat "Poet"
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Date: 4/14/2009 1:52:00 PM
The vivid imagery conveys your thoughts in a powerful and creative way. Good use of the challenging acrostic form. Keep up the good writing. Thank you for your kind words on my haiku. Karen
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Date: 4/14/2009 8:15:00 AM
Wow. Listen my friend, I so appreciate all your comments but I realize I simply pale in comparison to you. You are very kind and most generous. You sir, are a master poet and I am often so overwhelmed by your words, I am speechless. Did not even realize this was Acrostic when I first read it. What a tribute. Joy, such an appropriate name for one who symbolizes just that, and obviously so much more of what she brought into your life. Stunning. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/14/2009 7:59:00 AM
Such a beautiful acrostic worthy of any lady of the seas, great play on words and thoughtful muse. Well done. Thanks for your kindness of commenting my writes as ever, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 4/14/2009 7:58:00 AM
I had to read this several times.. but each time it got better and clearer--perhaps I'm not up to your level--but you write with conviction and in that there is no doubt
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