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Joy

Joy (Pleiades)    

Jettison leaden thoughts
Juxtapose light and dark
Join me in spreading the
Jovial mood of love
Jump with pure elation
Jocund spirits outwit
Jealousy, hate and fear.

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Contest: Pleiades 'J'
Sponsor: Kim Merryman
Placed 2nd
© 4th March 2017

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Susan Ashley January 9, 2018 at 8:07 PM I'm jumping for joy, Paul over the use of your 'J' words in this awesome and jubilant poem. A Pleiades well expressed and well deserved win for you my friend. Warmest wishes ~Susan Paul Callus January 11, 2018 at 10:13 AM Thank you, Susan; it's a poem of exhortation, thus no blaming you jumping for joy, my friend:) ~ Warm regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu September 8, 2017 at 3:22 PM I sense that this poem is a winner for the contest. have a nice day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu September 11, 2017 at 3:21 PM I hope you had a nice weekend. Paul Callus September 8, 2017 at 3:55 PM Thank you dear Darlene. Have a lovely weekend:) Regards // paul

Charlie Smith March 11, 2017 at 9:42 AM Such a joyous feeling you've penned Paul, thanks for sharing and congratulations... Paul Callus March 11, 2017 at 2:18 PM I am so pleased you found this to your liking, Charlie...thank you! Regards // paul

Lynn Marie March 10, 2017 at 2:19 PM Wow Paul! I love everything about your poem. Such a wonderful word and your beautiful interpretation is just gorgeous and most imaginative :-) Congratulations on the win; truly worthy and an absolute pleasure to read :-) A fave, 7++++! many blessings to you :-) lynn Paul Callus March 10, 2017 at 4:08 PM Thank you, Lynn, for your support and generosity; both the fave and high rating are much appreciated:) You have made my day:) Have a lovely weekend...paul

Alexis Y. March 8, 2017 at 6:45 PM Hi Paul, Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved: -) Alexis Paul Callus March 10, 2017 at 3:52 PM Thank you, Alexis:) Have a nice weekend:) Regards // paul

Agnes Krampe March 8, 2017 at 2:19 PM Coming back with congrats! Paul Callus March 10, 2017 at 3:39 PM Thank you, Agnes. Best regards // paul

Elizabeth Kinch March 8, 2017 at 10:12 AM Oh joy! Fabulous and deserving of your win. Paul Callus March 10, 2017 at 3:45 PM Thank you, Elizabeth; your comments too are a joy to read:) Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen March 8, 2017 at 2:17 AM - Congratulations on your win, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Paul Callus March 10, 2017 at 3:35 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise:) Have a lovely weekend! Hugs // paul

Darren White March 7, 2017 at 11:13 PM Coming back to you with congratulations :) Paul Callus March 10, 2017 at 3:31 PM Thank you, Darren :) Regards // paul

Joseph May March 7, 2017 at 8:35 PM Congrats on your win Paul Paul Callus March 10, 2017 at 3:28 PM Thank you, Joseph. Once again congrats on placing first!! Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues March 7, 2017 at 8:30 PM Pure joy! Congrats! Paul Callus March 10, 2017 at 3:27 PM I'm pleased that you like it, Kim...thank you! Regards // paul

Deborah Burch March 7, 2017 at 8:27 PM Congratulations Paul! Well done and positive! :) Big Hugggs deb Paul Callus March 10, 2017 at 3:22 PM Thank you, Deborah...pleased to have you standing next to me on the podium:) Hugs // paul

Eve Roper March 7, 2017 at 7:46 PM Awesome, Paul, congratulations on your win hugs Eve Paul Callus March 8, 2017 at 4:09 PM Thank you, Eve. I'm still wondering how your 'jukebox' does not appear on the winners' list! hugs // paul

Laura Leiser March 7, 2017 at 5:53 PM You described JOY in the most creative way with those J words, Paul! Really love this one...congrats on your win :) Paul Callus March 8, 2017 at 4:00 PM Thank you, Laura:) Your 'jazz' winning entry was a pleasure to read! Regards // paul

Kim Merryman March 7, 2017 at 4:58 PM Paul, your first word drew me in and your last two lines were the perfect ending! Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings, Kim Paul Callus March 8, 2017 at 3:27 PM Thank you very much, Kim, both for the high placing and the feedback on my poem. Looking forward to your next 'K' challenge! Warm regards // paul

CayCay Godwin March 6, 2017 at 11:24 PM That is joy very well tended, Paul! A pleasure to read - great words! Hugs ... CayCay Paul Callus March 7, 2017 at 10:19 AM I am glad you like it, CayCay....I'll dedicate this one to you, hoping that your future decisions will bring you joy and happiness. Throw any lingering doubts overboard:) Warm regards // paul

Judy Ball March 6, 2017 at 9:40 PM Excellent Paul. Very well done. God luck in the contest. A big 7 from me. God Bless, JB Paul Callus March 7, 2017 at 10:21 AM Thank you, Judy. You never cease to support and encourage! Blessings to you, too. Regards // paul

Darren White March 6, 2017 at 7:25 AM The joy of love... Wonderful Pleiades, good luck in the contest :) Paul Callus March 6, 2017 at 8:09 AM Thank you, Darren. Your entry is very good, too! Regards :) paul

Ravi Sathasivam March 6, 2017 at 3:52 AM Excellent and simply beautiful. Good luck with the contest. Well penned. Paul Callus March 6, 2017 at 8:08 AM You are very kind, Ravi; your lovely comments are appreciated. Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong March 6, 2017 at 3:24 AM I think your entry should fare very well Paul. These Pleiades are tough little buggers to write, but you have conquered the J's so wonderfully! Best of luck, but I don't think you will need it! 7 : ) Paul Callus March 6, 2017 at 8:07 AM Thank you, Connie. We have written so many Pleiades poems lately that we have surely got the hang of it now! Sending you warm regards ... paul

Joanna Daniel March 5, 2017 at 7:27 AM Simply lovely, Paul:) should be a winner:) a 7:) Paul Callus March 5, 2017 at 4:41 PM Thank you for liking and for the faith you show in it, Jo:) Regards // paul

Supraja Kannan March 5, 2017 at 4:46 AM Oh...How beautiful...Good luck with the contest... Paul Callus March 5, 2017 at 4:28 PM Thank you, Supraja; I liked your entry, too! Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2017 at 4:33 AM - A joyful and lovely pleiades, Paul :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Paul Callus March 5, 2017 at 4:23 PM Thank you for the 'like', Anne-Lise:) Regards & Hugs ~ paul

Agnes Krampe March 4, 2017 at 6:34 PM Oh, I love this one! We need joy. Good luck in the contest, Paul. Paul Callus March 5, 2017 at 4:07 PM Thank you, Agnes. I am glad you found this to your liking; may joy be with you, too! Regards // paul

Tim Smith March 4, 2017 at 3:23 PM A great entry Paul...One of the best I have read so far. Paul Callus March 5, 2017 at 3:37 PM Pleased that you liked it, Tim...thank you! Regards // paul

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