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Journey To the Unseen

Journey To The Unseen Time ebbed like watermark Life shadows the elusive dream Eventuality ignites a spark Reanimated beneath icy stream Veracity illumines the dark Burning deserts appear serene Footprints ardently embark A mystic journey to the unseen

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Franci Hoffman

Date: 6/21/2022 5:26:00 AM

Uplifting and superb rhythm and rhyme.

Anselmo Boles
Date: 7/14/2022 6:02:00 AM

Thank you for an energizing comment Franci Hoffman!...ab

Hai Phan

Date: 6/20/2022 9:35:00 AM

Inspiring words. Beautiful.

Anselmo Boles
Date: 7/14/2022 6:03:00 AM

I really appreciate your very warm comment Hai Phan!...ab

Clive Blake

Date: 2/1/2022 10:41:00 PM

I love this poem Anselmo, great imagery and a very dream-like quality to it ... :) ~ Clive

Anselmo Boles
Date: 2/2/2022 12:33:00 AM

Thank you very much for stopping by Clive, it's a great pleasure to hear from someone who is a prolific and very talented writer, and as importantly, thank you for the positive remark you made!...ab

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/20/2021 5:18:00 PM

I really like this poem, Anselmo. It was featured on the Home Page of the Soup website; that's where I saw it. Love 'the mystic journey.' Cheers, Gershon

Anselmo Boles
Date: 7/20/2021 8:16:00 PM

Thanks for enjoying this piece Gershon, and thanks for finding it on the Home Page as well!!...ab

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/19/2021 12:35:00 PM

My kind of journey. An excellent first piece. Thanks for your visit to my latest piece. I appreciate your thongs and comment.

Anselmo Boles
Date: 7/19/2021 5:59:00 PM

Thank you Richard! Once again, your latest poem is powerful and filled with veracity...ab

Ken Rone

Date: 4/15/2021 8:24:00 AM

I love your extended rhyme Anselmo. It is a great work and you should be proud of your days work.

Anselmo Boles
Date: 4/15/2021 9:51:00 AM

Thank you, and your kind assessment I do value Mr. Ken Rone! ---Anselmo