Journey To the Unseen

Journey To The Unseen 

 
                                      Time ebbed like watermark
                                     Life shadows the elusive dream
                                       Eventuality ignites a spark
                                     Reanimated beneath icy stream
                                        Veracity illumines the dark
                                      Burning deserts appear serene
                                        Footprints ardently embark
                                      A mystic journey to the unseen
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Hoffman Avatar
June 21, 2022 at 5:26 AM
Uplifting and superb rhythm and rhyme.
Boles Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 6:02 AM
Thank you for an energizing comment Franci Hoffman!...ab
Phan Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 9:35 AM
Inspiring words. Beautiful.
Boles Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 6:03 AM
I really appreciate your very warm comment Hai Phan!...ab
Blake Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 10:41 PM
I love this poem Anselmo, great imagery and a very dream-like quality to it ... :) ~ Clive
Boles Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 12:33 AM
Thank you very much for stopping by Clive, it's a great pleasure to hear from someone who is a prolific and very talented writer, and as importantly, thank you for the positive remark you made!...ab
Wolf Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 5:18 PM
I really like this poem, Anselmo. It was featured on the Home Page of the Soup website; that's where I saw it. Love 'the mystic journey.' Cheers, Gershon
Boles Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 8:16 PM
Thanks for enjoying this piece Gershon, and thanks for finding it on the Home Page as well!!...ab
Lamoureux Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 12:35 PM
My kind of journey. An excellent first piece. Thanks for your visit to my latest piece. I appreciate your thongs and comment.
Boles Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 5:59 PM
Thank you Richard! Once again, your latest poem is powerful and filled with veracity...ab
Rone Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 8:24 AM
I love your extended rhyme Anselmo. It is a great work and you should be proud of your days work.
Boles Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 9:51 AM
Thank you, and your kind assessment I do value Mr. Ken Rone! ---Anselmo
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