Journey To the Peak

Little blades of grass touching my naked feet
Oh, the soft pleasant touch, the trodden path
I am treading again; though this is my first
Venture, my maiden hike towards the peak
The great heights of the neighbouring mountains!
Have you ever lost yourself in the benumbing wilderness?
Have you ever heard the silent call of the Titans, metamorphosed
Into rocks? Little nameless flowers swaying their heads 
In an enchanted dance; the chill in the air 
Gently touching my mortal body, making a grand statement
“If the heaven exists anywhere, it’s here, it’s absolutely here”
The eternal path leads you from crag to crag, from bends to bends
Like a child of nature I play hide and seek with the impish fountains
And waterfalls, oh how majestically they cascade down 
On the wings of wild butterflies, 
Swiftly hiding 
Into impregnable gorges
The hairpin bends
Beckons
Oh, the wider stretch again
Looming, there is before, the endless and bottomless
Gulf of the sky, kissed benevolently by the sunny morning
High and hoary oaks and pines
Standing on both sides like insomniac sentries
The intolerable ache, nearly paralysed feet
One
Step 
Forward, another
One
Inflated lungs
Is it the end of the road?
Oh, god, at last, yeah, at last
I am on top 
I am looking beneath towards the inviting clouds
My eagle soul outstretches its wings

The sky kisses my forehead like my mother
 

17.09.2014
Contest: Pinnacle
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Onclaud Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 2:23 PM
on top of the heap with great word choice, prasenjit.. round of sweet congrats!
Banerjee Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 9:18 AM
lots of thanks, Nette
Yvonne Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 1:03 PM
Oops, I realized you were not on my list of fav poets, so I added you.
Banerjee Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 9:17 AM
Thanks again, Maurice. Your words always encourage me.
Yvonne Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 1:01 PM
I came back to read this again and to fav it my friend.
Richards Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 5:48 PM
Simply exquisite.....I love this! Well deserved win !!
Banerjee Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 10:56 AM
Thanks, Carrie for your kind remarks... Prasenjit
Guzzi Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 4:02 PM
Made me wish I was there with you. Congrad's on your win, Light & Love
Banerjee Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 10:57 AM
Thanks, Debbie
Sietesantos Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 12:17 PM
Congratulations on your TOP of the class well-deserved win! Beautifully penned! Pandita
Banerjee Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 10:58 AM
Thank you Pandita. It's really a fascinating experience to get on the top.
Allison Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 11:21 AM
Beautifully written a well deserved place at the top of the podium:-) hugs Jan xx
Banerjee Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 10:59 AM
Thanks for the compliment... Prasenjit
Mandani Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 11:01 AM
Well-deserved win. Very imaginative and very well written. Congrats.
Banerjee Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 11:00 AM
Thanks a lot ... Prasenjit
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 8:53 AM
Absolutely beautiful Prasenjit. Congratulations on your first place win.
Banerjee Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 11:06 AM
Thanks for your kind remarks
Yvonne Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 8:20 AM
Excellent write, Congratulations on your first place win.
Banerjee Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 11:08 AM
I always love the hilltops and hilly terrains. The journey to the peak is always rewarding. Thanks for your compliments... Prasenjit
Bianco Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 7:32 AM
Well done Prasanjit! I felt as though I was with you on this dreamy journey. Best Wishes, Anthony
Banerjee Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 11:10 AM
It's quite overwhelming to be at the top. Thanks for sharing my feelings... prasenjit
A. Sharma Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 7:20 AM
Here u reach pinnacle Prasanjit wid such a wonderful write! Huge congrats on first place win!
Banerjee Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 11:11 AM
O my joy knows no bounds! Thank u Dr. Upma
Lawless Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 7:04 AM
Beautifully written and well deserved placement atop the peak. Truly enjoyed this magnificent journey.
Banerjee Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 11:12 AM
Thanks a lot my friend... Prasenjit
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