Journey Goes On and On

From the inception of Soul
caused in to the body
in the Universal Whole
journey goes on and on 

Who am I? where from?
where to go? where to end?
I ask in me for that
ready to expense  
only what I have 

Within a fickle of seconds
I see a light with closed eyes 
not pointed as it goes ahead
I get the clue but forget

From the inception 
journey goes on and on........
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Cayton Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 10:52 AM
congratualations! awesome poetry here, well deserved feature.
Devnath  Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 11:12 AM
Thanks my friend for giving congratulation. Nice meet. bl
Horsman Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 8:15 AM
We are only a speck with in the universe Bl, but boy what an impact we make when we can read poetry as wonderful as this. harry
Devnath  Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 8:20 AM
Thanks, many thanks for reading my write. Loved it, my sweet friend. bl
Andresen Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 10:56 AM
Congratulations on the week`s win bl!!! :)oxox love from Anne-Lise
Devnath  Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 11:14 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for wishing me congratulation. God bless us all. bl
Brown Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 7:57 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week BL. I wish you the best in 2012 with your writing. Love, Carol
Devnath  Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 9:57 AM
It's the love of the Poetry Soup where all glittering stars of the literature world considered my feeling. Thanks you unending for your kind congratulation. Loved it. God bless us all, all the time. bl
Wesley Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 5:02 PM
BL, you describe the journey with grace and style. Keep up your writing as I do enjoy.
Devnath  Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 12:41 AM
Thanks with heart for advising me to keep up my writing on. I pray GOD always bless us for all we need in this world. bl
Devonshire Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 1:20 PM
So true, BL, our journey begins at conception and we are ever struggling to reach the light. Along the way we encounter many trials and confusion. Excellent poem that shows great insight. Love, Carolyn
Devnath  Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 8:45 PM
You have given weight of my inner insight. Thanks. love bl
Well Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 10:42 AM
nice poem!
Devnath  Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 8:46 PM
Thanks for reading and giving comment regarding as nice.
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