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Years with you in a throne
My queen, in the rain we flown
We nurtured our love, so it grown
Memories we shared, wont condone
Our heart sealed in a diamond stone
Life with you was all I have known
now I must take this journey all alone
travel to a far land of an unknown
endure this pain all in my own
destiny split us, for that, I groan
I am at loss and in my own
so much tears, my eyes blown
my body aches and melts to its bone
our heart bleeds with pain and torn
one portion for you to own
the rest for me to shown
in lonely nights I must mourn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/5/2017 9:47:00 AM
I waiting for your new writes,Asad....
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Date: 11/9/2017 5:50:00 PM
A beautifully sad write Asad. Lovely melancholy lines; 'destiny split us, for that, I groan' and 'heart bleeds with pain and torn one portion for you to own' - very expressive forlorn poetry... Enjoyed!
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Date: 6/11/2017 8:16:00 AM
Very emotional, Asad. Especially, destiny split us for that I groan. And thank you for your comment on my now and then.
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Asad Abdalle
Date: 6/11/2017 10:33:00 AM
Thanks Ralph
Date: 6/10/2017 1:10:00 PM
Heartfelt beautiful write,dear friend...Very sad and equally awesome ....
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Asad Abdalle
Date: 6/10/2017 3:13:00 PM
Thanks Anand, good to have a feed back
Date: 6/1/2017 7:01:00 PM
Great emotion, Asad.
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Asad Abdalle
Date: 6/1/2017 7:30:00 PM
Thanks Kim.
Date: 5/23/2017 10:41:00 AM
I am really sorry Asad, you sound so sad and lonely. Your poem is beautiful.
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Asad Abdalle
Date: 5/23/2017 10:54:00 AM
Thanks Darren, you are one of the few people that welcomes and encourages every new poet that posts at poetry Soup....keep it up freind, thanks.

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