Journey

Just take the first step. Walk,
Jog or crawl, but begin!
Journal pages will talk:
Joy and pain, found within.
Judge not harshly, be kind,
Join the search – you will find
Juicy wonderful life.

March 4, 2017
For contest Pleiades J
Sponsored by Kim Merryman
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 10:35 PM
Or fake it till you feel it. Well penned, Agnes.
Emmanuel Brown Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 2:18 PM
Great poem. Well done, congrat on your win
Callus Avatar
March 10, 2017 at 3:38 PM
This poem stands out due to its positivity and encouragement, Agnes...well done and congratulations! Regards // paul
Goff Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 11:44 PM
Sweet hope...and perseverance...nice!
Canerdy Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 9:07 PM
Very uplifting, Agnes. Congrats on your win. Janice
Krampe Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 9:28 PM
Thanks, Janice.
Burch Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 2:41 PM
Agnes!! Congratulations! I this encouraging write...you have done well! Big Hugggs!! deb
Krampe Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 9:28 PM
Thanks, Deb.
Allison Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 10:53 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Agnes:-) hugs Jan xx
Krampe Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 2:18 PM
Thanks, Jan.
Andresen Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 2:22 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Agnes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krampe Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 2:18 PM
Thanks again, Anne-Lise.
White Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 11:17 PM
Yours is so well written, wonderful. Congratulations :)
Krampe Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 2:17 PM
Thanks, Darren.
Merryman Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 9:08 PM
Agnes, this is a wonderful, positive message! Great Pleiades! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim
Krampe Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 2:13 PM
Thank you so much, Kim.
May Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 8:49 PM
Nicely done Agnes..Congrats on your win
Medders Tobechi Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 8:18 PM
Well done. I think we all agree that j was hard to tackle and k will be even more of a challenge. Congrats and blessings.
Roper Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 7:59 PM
Very nice, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
Leiser Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 6:55 PM
Wise words for the Journey, Agnes.. great job! Congrats on your win :)
Otieng Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 11:01 AM
Very nice. Well thought and structured words. Best wishes.
Dietrich Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 10:25 PM
you chose an excellent them, Agnes. VERY well done!
Krampe Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 2:17 PM
Thanks, Andrea.
Callus Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 4:04 PM
You travel with insight and conviction, Agnes! Your 'journey' is very well planned and it exudes positivity. A very worthy entry! Regards // paul
Krampe Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 2:16 PM
Thanks for your kind words, Paul.
Sands Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 10:20 AM
Wow Agnes! You did really well with this one! Good luck in the contest. :)
Krampe Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 2:16 PM
Thanks, Heidi.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 9:16 AM
I'm enjoying these, you did yours so well.
Krampe Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 2:14 PM
Thanks, Richard.
Daniel Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 8:03 AM
Wow, this is beautifully structured, Agnes:) hope it wins:)
Krampe Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 2:13 PM
thanks, Jo.
Andresen Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 4:00 AM
- A lovely pleiades journey, Agnes :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krampe Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 2:13 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise.
Allison Avatar
March 4, 2017 at 4:00 PM
Very uplifting Agnes - incidentally I've never kept a diary but parts of my life are now documented in some of my poems:-) hugs Jan xx
Krampe Avatar
March 4, 2017 at 6:31 PM
I used to keep diaries regularly when I was younger, but not so much as an adult - only in times of inner turmoil. And yes, poetry can serve as a pretty good diary, too.
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