Journey

Just take the first step. Walk, Jog or crawl, but begin! Journal pages will talk: Joy and pain, found within. Judge not harshly, be kind, Join the search – you will find Juicy wonderful life. March 4, 2017 For contest Pleiades J Sponsored by Kim Merryman

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Line Gauthier

Date: 7/24/2018 10:35:00 PM

Or fake it till you feel it. Well penned, Agnes.

Omojewve Emmanuel Brown

Date: 3/14/2017 2:18:00 PM

Great poem. Well done, congrat on your win

Paul Callus

Date: 3/10/2017 3:38:00 PM

This poem stands out due to its positivity and encouragement, Agnes...well done and congratulations! Regards // paul

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/8/2017 11:44:00 PM

Sweet hope...and perseverance...nice!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/8/2017 9:07:00 PM

Very uplifting, Agnes. Congrats on your win. Janice

Agnes Krampe
Date: 3/8/2017 9:28:00 PM

Thanks, Janice.

Deborah Burch

Date: 3/8/2017 2:41:00 PM

Agnes!! Congratulations! I this encouraging write...you have done well! Big Hugggs!! deb

Agnes Krampe
Date: 3/8/2017 9:28:00 PM

Thanks, Deb.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/8/2017 10:53:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Agnes:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe
Date: 3/8/2017 2:18:00 PM

Thanks, Jan.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/8/2017 2:22:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Agnes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Agnes Krampe
Date: 3/8/2017 2:18:00 PM

Thanks again, Anne-Lise.

Darren White

Date: 3/7/2017 11:17:00 PM

Yours is so well written, wonderful. Congratulations :)

Agnes Krampe
Date: 3/8/2017 2:17:00 PM

Thanks, Darren.

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/7/2017 9:08:00 PM

Agnes, this is a wonderful, positive message! Great Pleiades! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Agnes Krampe
Date: 3/8/2017 2:13:00 PM

Thank you so much, Kim.

Joseph May

Date: 3/7/2017 8:49:00 PM

Nicely done Agnes..Congrats on your win

Janis Thompson

Date: 3/7/2017 8:18:00 PM

Well done. I think we all agree that j was hard to tackle and k will be even more of a challenge. Congrats and blessings.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/7/2017 7:59:00 PM

Very nice, congratulations on your win hugs Eve

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/7/2017 6:55:00 PM

Wise words for the Journey, Agnes.. great job! Congrats on your win :)

Samuel Otieng

Date: 3/7/2017 11:01:00 AM

Very nice. Well thought and structured words. Best wishes.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/5/2017 10:25:00 PM

you chose an excellent them, Agnes. VERY well done!

Agnes Krampe
Date: 3/8/2017 2:17:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/5/2017 4:04:00 PM

You travel with insight and conviction, Agnes! Your 'journey' is very well planned and it exudes positivity. A very worthy entry! Regards // paul

Agnes Krampe
Date: 3/8/2017 2:16:00 PM

Thanks for your kind words, Paul.

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/5/2017 10:20:00 AM

Wow Agnes! You did really well with this one! Good luck in the contest. :)

Agnes Krampe
Date: 3/8/2017 2:16:00 PM

Thanks, Heidi.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/5/2017 9:16:00 AM

I'm enjoying these, you did yours so well.

Agnes Krampe
Date: 3/8/2017 2:14:00 PM

Thanks, Richard.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/5/2017 8:03:00 AM

Wow, this is beautifully structured, Agnes:) hope it wins:)

Agnes Krampe
Date: 3/8/2017 2:13:00 PM

thanks, Jo.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/5/2017 4:00:00 AM

- A lovely pleiades journey, Agnes :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Agnes Krampe
Date: 3/8/2017 2:13:00 PM

Thanks, Anne-Lise.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/4/2017 4:00:00 PM

Very uplifting Agnes - incidentally I've never kept a diary but parts of my life are now documented in some of my poems:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe
Date: 3/4/2017 6:31:00 PM

I used to keep diaries regularly when I was younger, but not so much as an adult - only in times of inner turmoil. And yes, poetry can serve as a pretty good diary, too.