Journey

JOURNEY
MANY MILES ALONG WITH MANY FEET.
WALKED TO LONG TO BE FACED WITH DEFEAT.
I KEEP GOING NO MATTER HOW HARD THE  PATH WAY.
MY GOAL IS CLOSER WITH EVERY STEP I TAKE.
THE HILLS ARE LONG AND SOMETIMES HARD YOU SEE.
ITS A TEST OF STRENGTH HAVING NO ONE HERE WITH ME.
ITS SO EASY TO STOP OR QUIT.
BUT THATS THE WRONG WAY I MUST ADMIT.
I MUST TAKE THIS JOURNEY TO FIND OUT WHERE I BEGIN.
MAYBE TO FIND MY LOST SELF AT THE THE END.
THE JOURNEY GETTING SHORTER I CAN SLMOST SEE MY GOAL.
IM SO TIRED ITS BEEN QUITE A TOLL.
IM SO EXHAUSTED DO NOT KNOW IF I CAN GO ON.
TELL MYSELF YOU CAN DO IT LOOK HOW FAR YOU HAVE GONE.
FINALLY IM HERE WITH SWEAT ON MY BROW.
I CANT BELIEVE  I MADE ITS CAN NOT SEE HOW.
KIND OF DISSAPOINTED AT THE END CAUSE 
DID NOT LIKE WHAT I SEE.
THE ONLY THING WAITING THERE WAS A 
MIRROR LOOKING BACK AT ME.
WALKED SO LONG LOOKING FOR SOMETHING TO FIND.
HOW STUPID WAS I FOR WALKING BLIND.
NOW WITH EYES OPEN MY JOURNEY IS EASIER TO FOLLOW.
I FEEL MUCH BETTERR KNOWING THE TRUTH 
EVEN IF HARD TO SWALLOW.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/28/2011 9:41:00 AM
Stopping by to say hello and let you I enjoyed reading your poetry today John. I am in the process of packing up to move in a couple weeks so not much time for one on one. I will be stopping by when I can. Have a wonderful weekend and keep your pen flowing. Love and blessings, Carol
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