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Journey

from trickles in mountains its journey starts, meandering through rocks and valleys, making its way to sea

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Heidi Sands

Date: 3/18/2024 1:47:00 PM

A beautiful journey it is. Very nice Joseph :)

Silpika Kalita

Date: 3/17/2024 10:25:00 AM

Excellent merging of musing, metaphor and flow

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/17/2024 10:12:00 AM

Your "Journey" is a wonderful Ninette write. I love the sea... Have a wonderful day writing away..................

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/16/2024 3:49:00 PM

It's breathtaking indeed, watching water travel to the sea. Over mountains and through rocks. This is beautiful in every way. My best to you, Joseph. :) Hugs, Brandy

Marugu Mo

Date: 3/16/2024 2:10:00 PM

Small beginnings may seem trivial, but they make the flood. I have never tried a ninette before but this is masterfully woven

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/16/2024 12:03:00 PM

- A beautiful sight, Joseph :) - hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 3/16/2024 11:03:00 AM

beautifully described in so few words Joseph, a charming ninette:-) hugs Jan xx

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/16/2024 10:44:00 AM

Oh I love the trip to the sea, anytime dear Joseph, thanks for sharing this, I picture the sea and I smile.

Ink Empress

Date: 3/16/2024 10:00:00 AM

Beautiful ninette. Ah your ninette made me miss writing them. I love how beautifully your words flow as always dear joseph. Soulful imagery and depth in your well articulated lines, pleasure reading your work always

Silent One

Date: 3/16/2024 7:30:00 AM

You describe it so serenely.. lovely weaving of words portraying the beauty of nature..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/16/2024 5:24:00 AM

Isn't nature amazing and rewarding--wonderfully penned, Joseph.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/15/2024 8:13:00 PM

So simple but the entire story of water is contained in your poem. An excellent read.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/15/2024 5:49:00 PM

Hello Joseph, you beautifully capture the journey of water from its humble beginnings in the mountains to its destination in the sea. The imagery of trickles, rocks, and valleys paints a vivid picture of nature's flow. Elegant and evocative. - Blessings, Daniel

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/15/2024 5:27:00 PM

a beautifully flowing Ninette...such a pleasure to read...we humans, too, begin our meandering journey and make our way to the magnificent sea. Perhaps I'm making too much of this poem...just thought it was metaphorical. Nicely done...have a pleasant weekend, Sara