Journey

from trickles in mountains its journey starts, meandering through rocks and valleys, making its way to sea
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Sands Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 1:47 PM
A beautiful journey it is. Very nice Joseph :)
Kalita Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 10:25 AM
Excellent merging of musing, metaphor and flow
Goldsmith Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 10:12 AM
Your "Journey" is a wonderful Ninette write. I love the sea... Have a wonderful day writing away..................
Nicole Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 3:49 PM
It's breathtaking indeed, watching water travel to the sea. Over mountains and through rocks. This is beautiful in every way. My best to you, Joseph. :) Hugs, Brandy
Mo Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 2:10 PM
Small beginnings may seem trivial, but they make the flood. I have never tried a ninette before but this is masterfully woven
Andresen Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 12:03 PM
- A beautiful sight, Joseph :) - hugs
Allison Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 11:03 AM
beautifully described in so few words Joseph, a charming ninette:-) hugs Jan xx
Rose  Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 10:44 AM
Oh I love the trip to the sea, anytime dear Joseph, thanks for sharing this, I picture the sea and I smile.
Empress Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 10:00 AM
Beautiful ninette. Ah your ninette made me miss writing them. I love how beautifully your words flow as always dear joseph. Soulful imagery and depth in your well articulated lines, pleasure reading your work always
One Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 7:30 AM
You describe it so serenely.. lovely weaving of words portraying the beauty of nature..
Pandit Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 5:24 AM
Isn't nature amazing and rewarding--wonderfully penned, Joseph.
Greenhough Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 8:13 PM
So simple but the entire story of water is contained in your poem. An excellent read.
Rodgers Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 5:49 PM
Hello Joseph, you beautifully capture the journey of water from its humble beginnings in the mountains to its destination in the sea. The imagery of trickles, rocks, and valleys paints a vivid picture of nature's flow. Elegant and evocative. - Blessings, Daniel
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