Journey

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Journey, viewing life scenery Mind-body doomed to die Mark each moment with pleasantry As love does for bliss vie Although desires yet hound Love suffused, feet on ground We then are never bound Look-see Journey 11-September-2021 Quietus

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/10/2021 10:33:00 PM

Lovely write. I like the word you choose for your poem. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/11/2021 1:47:00 AM

Ah! The poem title was bcoz of Constance’s contest prompt, although I’ll probably write another one for it. Bit of a challenge to use a mere two syllable title/refrain in this format.