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"To die would be an awfully big adventure!" - J.M. Barrie, Peter Pan Death A grand Adventure God's gift to make Each breath so precious Life's sweet echo Warm and dark Like the Womb. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "August Ninette" Poetry Contest, Caren Krutsinger, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 8/22/2019 2:31:00 PM
Bravo. Congrats on your top win, Gregory.
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Date: 8/21/2019 6:41:00 AM
Cor luvaduck, that is a big thought for a little poem. Love it!
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 8/21/2019 7:17:00 AM
I'm very pleased you liked it, Nina - and the quote from a favorite Brit of mine, who began his story in Kensington Gardens, (where I MUST go, near the top of my Bucket List, right after Paris). Many thanks and blessings! :o) <3
Date: 8/19/2019 9:45:00 PM
A unique journey into the life-death balance, Greg, all in a short ninette. Bravo! And congrats on your win in the contest. :) gw
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 8/21/2019 7:16:00 AM
That's very kind of you to say, Gershon, and I thank you so much! Blessings! :o)
Date: 8/11/2019 11:30:00 AM
- ... so precious, God's gift ...beautiful, Gregory :) - Luck in the contest :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 8/21/2019 7:16:00 AM
Amen! Thank you so very much, Anne-Lise - blessings, my friend! :o) <3
Date: 8/11/2019 9:00:00 AM
A wonderful way to look at death and our walk through life. A sure winner.
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 8/21/2019 7:15:00 AM
Many kind thanks, Jeanne, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it! :o) <3
Date: 8/11/2019 7:44:00 AM
I love this and the quote too!!
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 8/21/2019 7:15:00 AM
Thank you very much, Kim - blessings! :o) <3