Gregory Richard Barden Poet Ninette

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Journey

"To die would be an awfully big adventure!" - J.M. Barrie, Peter Pan



Death
A grand
Adventure
God's gift to make
Each breath so precious
Life's sweet echo
Warm and dark
Like the
Womb.





~ 1st Place ~  in the "August Ninette" Poetry Contest, Caren Krutsinger, Judge & Sponsor.

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Line Gauthier August 22, 2019 at 2:31 PM Bravo. Congrats on your top win, Gregory.

Gershon Wolf August 19, 2019 at 9:45 PM A unique journey into the life-death balance, Greg, all in a short ninette. Bravo! And congrats on your win in the contest. :) gw Gregory Richard Barden August 21, 2019 at 7:16 AM That's very kind of you to say, Gershon, and I thank you so much! Blessings! :o)

Anne-Lise Andresen August 11, 2019 at 11:30 AM - ... so precious, God's gift ...beautiful, Gregory :) - Luck in the contest :) - // Anne-Lise :) Gregory Richard Barden August 21, 2019 at 7:16 AM Amen! Thank you so very much, Anne-Lise - blessings, my friend! :o) <3

Jeanne Mcgee August 11, 2019 at 9:00 AM A wonderful way to look at death and our walk through life. A sure winner. Gregory Richard Barden August 21, 2019 at 7:15 AM Many kind thanks, Jeanne, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it! :o) <3

Kim Rodrigues August 11, 2019 at 7:44 AM I love this and the quote too!! Gregory Richard Barden August 21, 2019 at 7:15 AM Thank you very much, Kim - blessings! :o) <3