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Jordon

Send me an Angel for me to hold, One with wings and a halo of gold. Send me that precious gift I long for, A smile so sweet and eyes to adore. Send him here for me to cherish, Make him kind, loyal and garish. Send him here with love and grace, A child whose unique style I'll embrace. Send me the patience to be a mother, Hoping he'll love us and his brother. Not a typical family is what we are, But we could be much worse by far. Jordon is the answer to my prayers, A big brother, for Chris, who truly cares. Love is what we have to give, Without my son I could not live. Thank you God, you've done what I asked. As a good mother, please tell me did I pass?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/27/2009 9:31:00 PM
Very beautiful and touching poem Aleera. May God bless your family and kids. Yara
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Date: 3/19/2009 5:51:00 AM
Great mother poem that is an example of faith and prayer. Thanks for bringing me into the intimate sensitivity of a mother's feeling. Love.
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Date: 3/16/2009 4:30:00 AM
aww so beautiful written, as mums we all hope we pass at being good and to do the verry best for our children, I am sure you passed with flying colours Alera and thanks for the feed back on my poem in my heart. God bless you from diane
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Date: 3/14/2009 9:12:00 AM
Aleera, what a beautiful poem you have composed here for so many others to relate to. It contains a special love for children and a faith in our creator that so many need to grasp. Once again, your poetic brillence is shining brightly as I say this Fan Boy will always be watching your amazing writing style because you give me such a huge warm smile. Wonderful Poem... Your Fan Boy MPK
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Date: 3/14/2009 7:31:00 AM
This is a touching piece. I have two sons as well and along with my two daughters and the three extras I have adopted along the way I have quite the bunch. Yes my friend, motherhood is a blessing, through all of the trials and love it is a gift sent straight from Heaven above. The flow of this piece is wonderful and the message is magical. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/14/2009 3:41:00 AM
Hi Aleera. You are truly blessed to have two boys. We have three and one of our sons is called Jordan as well, its a wonderful name. God bless you and your family. Leon, Sue & family
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