Jon, Them Thin Hands See

(For a blind man…)

Sighted vision is a mystery.
Whether sitting on the divan,
Busily washing a dishpan,
Or sitting outside getting a tan.
Jon, them thin hands see.

Whether using salt and not cayenne,
I declare you amaze me, man. 
You work and live industriously.
I remain your biggest fan.
Jon, them thin hands see.

Whether riding in a sedan
Or walking on the street, 
You always greet the folks you meet.
Friendship never does retreat.
Independently living my dear friend.
Jon, them thin hands see.


© April 11, 2011
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Written for PS Member Congest:  Anagrammatically Speaking 
Sponsored by: nikko palmario
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Susan Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 7:14 AM
Congrats on your win!
Mannan Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 6:20 AM
Many warmest congrats Dane Ann for this superb write.
Brown Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 5:32 AM
Congratulations on your win Dane Ann in Nikko's "Anagram" contest. Love, Carol
Magness Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 8:55 PM
Love this idea and very easy to visualize the blind man doing these things!! Congratulations on your 3rd place. Brian
Kendrick Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 4:15 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 3:22 PM
I can see why Nikko had a hard time judging. I am not seeing one bad poem in this bunch. YUours is right up there. A very cool one to read.Congratulations, Dane ann.
Devonshire Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 3:12 PM
Positively awesome, Dane. This goes to my faves. Congratulations on your win in Nikko's contest! Love you, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 1:37 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on your super win in Nikko's great contest with this exceptional entry my friend.. enjoy your top spot with luv..
Guzzi Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 12:51 PM
Good job here makes one wonder if you really know such a man? Congrad's on your win. Light & love
Mehta Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 11:40 AM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of nikko, Dane
K. Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 11:22 AM
Super congrats Dane Ann for this very moving write :) Your anagram was definitely unique and you wove such a wonderful character with it :) Thank you for joining with this amazing entry :)
Sweetheart Avatar
April 10, 2011 at 8:00 PM
Good Luck Dane Ann in Nikko's contest with this excellent entry luv.. amazing as always are your words...
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