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Jon, Them Thin Hands See

(For a blind man…) Sighted vision is a mystery. Whether sitting on the divan, Busily washing a dishpan, Or sitting outside getting a tan. Jon, them thin hands see. Whether using salt and not cayenne, I declare you amaze me, man. You work and live industriously. I remain your biggest fan. Jon, them thin hands see. Whether riding in a sedan Or walking on the street, You always greet the folks you meet. Friendship never does retreat. Independently living my dear friend. Jon, them thin hands see. © April 11, 2011 Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Written for PS Member Congest: Anagrammatically Speaking Sponsored by: nikko palmario

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Date: 4/12/2011 7:14:00 AM
Congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/12/2011 6:20:00 AM
Many warmest congrats Dane Ann for this superb write.
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Date: 4/12/2011 5:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Dane Ann in Nikko's "Anagram" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/11/2011 8:55:00 PM
Love this idea and very easy to visualize the blind man doing these things!! Congratulations on your 3rd place. Brian
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Date: 4/11/2011 4:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 4/11/2011 3:22:00 PM
I can see why Nikko had a hard time judging. I am not seeing one bad poem in this bunch. YUours is right up there. A very cool one to read.Congratulations, Dane ann.
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Date: 4/11/2011 3:12:00 PM
Positively awesome, Dane. This goes to my faves. Congratulations on your win in Nikko's contest! Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 4/11/2011 1:37:00 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on your super win in Nikko's great contest with this exceptional entry my friend.. enjoy your top spot with luv..
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Date: 4/11/2011 12:51:00 PM
Good job here makes one wonder if you really know such a man? Congrad's on your win. Light & love
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Date: 4/11/2011 11:40:00 AM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of nikko, Dane
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Date: 4/11/2011 11:22:00 AM
Super congrats Dane Ann for this very moving write :) Your anagram was definitely unique and you wove such a wonderful character with it :) Thank you for joining with this amazing entry :)
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Date: 4/10/2011 8:00:00 PM
Good Luck Dane Ann in Nikko's contest with this excellent entry luv.. amazing as always are your words...
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