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10/ 28/ 24

Jill Nursery Rhyme

Fourth Place

Contest by Charles Messina.

Jolly Jill


    Water brought by Jolly Jill.
     She wishes the jug to fill.
     Jug is becoming half- full.
     Hole at side, making her fool.
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Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 11:36 AM
Funny one. Congrats, Anisha
Roper Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 6:41 PM
Good one, Anisha.
Messina Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 2:50 AM
Good one, Anisha. Congrats on your placement. Thanks for entering my contest. Charlie
Dutta Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 5:06 AM
Thanks Charles for appreciation and placement in your contest. Blessings
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