Join My Dream

Oh lets join our dreams together, walk
the path of forever. Let's kiss in starry
skies, make love in the moonbeams 
glow, caress with loving eyes. Let's
dip our toes in the waters of desire,
meld, bond, explode in the ecstasy
of our union. A union in rhyme with
two beating hearts, borne on a tide of
lasting emotions. Let the moon be the
jewel in our crown and the stars the 
diamonds that surround, let the night
be the blanket that covers our love.
Let lips meet and pores touch in the 
spirit of passion, and create bliss
both sublime and to be treasured.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Clark Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 7:28 AM
Ahhh, only to dream, how awesome..... Jeralynn A favorite
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March 12, 2010 at 5:45 AM
Are you this "romantic" in life, Daniel? Who could resist a man with such a gift for creating beauty through words? But you already know I'm a fan. Wonderful poem! Love, Carolyn
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March 11, 2010 at 7:35 PM
A most romantic and passionate write Daniel and a new favorite of mine tonight.. warmth and emotion exudes from your words so brilliantly...luv.. "Sweetheart" ..thankxxx for your many special comments and uplifting remarks on my poetry.. always...
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March 11, 2010 at 5:32 AM
Daniel,what a beauty to come and read such dreams..i love these kind of dreams,they make each reader dream-excellent wrk-Charma.
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March 11, 2010 at 12:54 AM
Nice one Daniel & thank you for your kind words today Rgds Brian
Owens Avatar
March 10, 2010 at 2:17 PM
WOW My mouth's watering!!! lol Such beautiful words... Why can't I think of things like this to write??? lol Enjoyed...Marty
Clark Avatar
March 10, 2010 at 12:45 PM
Whew....fan, fan, fan...steamy and sultry, I love it! Nice Daniel! Jeralynn
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March 10, 2010 at 11:06 AM
Very passionate write in this one, Daniel. I like the first line especially...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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March 10, 2010 at 9:16 AM
Good poem to join in a contest. I enjoyed reading ..TATA
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