Join Me In the Rain
Join me in the rain
For I'd gone insane,
Cutting through my veins,
Washing away the pain,
Everybody's slain,
Their teardrops drained,
But only the blood remains.
P.S. Still need a little bit to work on.
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Qui Bee | Year Posted 2010
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