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John Watt Poem Comment

If John (or Jane), a spouse (or bike) can bring butt pain and some fools in pursuit of mere bliss think both tools. Most fighters win rounds (one or two). But do they fight to win (for you)? Some might say I’m a blighter. Still, new bikes are lighter! There are good wines that age, but the best wine IS vintage. If courtesy’s a subtle art, integrity’s its dearest part! Life (flat out) can mean bugs in your eye, though you fly! Ride uphill grants a clearer view; this world’s not you! Krakatoa Kritic #007 My poem is more a humorous comment on the human tendency toward revisionism (I hope) than a criticism of John’s sly original poem with its twist. This light-hearted free verse rates a ‘10!’ I enjoyed it, John, though I prefer rhymes! See ‘Together for the Long Ride,’ a poem by John Watt on PoetrySoup.com.

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