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Written June 19, 2023

John the Baptist

In the spirit of Elijah, John appeared on the scene,
Preaching that they should repent of sin, "Come sinners, get clean".
He baptized in the Jordan those who confessed their sin,
And called out the self-righteous for their hard hearts within. 

John had a mission: to prepare the way for Messiah.
To some he seemed a prophet, to others a pariah.
His clothing was strange - a tunic made up of camel's hair,
And he dined on locusts and wild honey - such meager fare.

Meeting Jesus at the Jordan, John baptized Him one day.
"This is My beloved Son," he heard God clearly say.
King Herod didn't like John much and had him arrested.
Then Salome danced her best, and John's head was requested.
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Kauffman Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 11:45 AM
Kim, congratulations on your win! You did a wonderful job highlighting the important aspects of John's amazing life. Congratulations on your win! Blessings! So wonderful to have you back doing the backstroke in the soup!
Merryman Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 9:35 AM
Thank you, Sam! It's good to be back!
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July 5, 2023 at 7:05 AM
Kim, congrats! Fantastic poem on John the Baptizer. So many don't realized Christ is not God, but God's son. Glad you used that scripture, showing God in heaven, and Christ on earth, two separate individuals. Well done!
Merryman Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 9:34 AM
Thank you for your comment, Barbara! Jesus Himself says that He and the Father are One.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 3:35 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write again. Have a blessed day.................
Merryman Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 9:29 AM
Thank you, Paula!
Alex Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 12:54 AM
I felt very glad when I read your poem after a very long time. A great writing on John the Baptist. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Merryman Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 9:31 AM
Thank you, Christuraj!
Daniel Avatar
July 2, 2023 at 11:49 PM
Awesome write, Kim, thank you for participation and congratulations:)
Merryman Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 9:31 AM
Thank you, Joanna for my placement! You had some tough choices to make!
Goldsmith Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 10:29 AM
A wonderful write/story. Love It. Have a great day/week............
Merryman Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 9:30 AM
Thank you, Paula!
Callus Avatar
June 24, 2023 at 9:20 AM
You have been very faithful to "John the Baptist", even though you had to summarise what could have otherwise been a long version, Kim! ~ Regards // paul
Merryman Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 9:29 AM
Thank you, Paul! Yes, it was hard to condense all the info.
Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 12:31 PM
You did REALLY well with the challenge!! One of the best I have seen. You chose a really good character to write about also.
Merryman Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 7:09 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Canerdy Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 1:14 PM
Kim, you did a GREAT job on this poem. You smoothly incorporated the highlights of his life~~and in just 12 lines! Janice
Merryman Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 7:08 PM
Thank you, Janice!
Kaufman Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 6:14 AM
Hi Kim, It was such a barbaric act. I guess as professed Christians, we are supposed to take our misery as a blessing. It ain't easy though.. Enjoyed this poem.
Merryman Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 7:08 PM
Thank you, Nancy!
Rose  Avatar
June 20, 2023 at 3:06 AM
God had many devotees and any Saintly men, John was one of them, well written rhyme my dear. Thank you for sharing this delightful reminder :)
Merryman Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 7:07 PM
Thank you, Vie!
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