John Doe

Can You tell me how i am feeling just by looking in my eyes
Can you tell my pass just by feeling the tremble in my hands
Can you tell me when i am lying even when i have s straight face
Can you tell me who i am even when i have forgotten
With out having to be reminded
Be my wakening call and my good night text
Be there for me thick through then
And even when i have mad a mess of everything
Can you be my shoulder to cry one
The one to make me smile 
The one to brighten up my day when it is dark and gloomy
Then one to tell me i am  pretty even when i look a hot mess
Be my other half 
My right hand
My guy 
And mines Only because i hate to shared
will you be honest with me 
even if it hurts
will you take care of me in sickness and in health
will you be able to commit and love me
are you loyal and can you stick to your word
Are you capable to hold me down
will you be my no matter what 
but most importantly can you be
You
Because as long as you are that and Loyal and true
Then i don't need the totally package and we can go from there
Because no relationship is perfect and but hey we can both be imperfect together i guess
And Show the world the new meaning of true love
even though we are young
Just tell me i can keep your secret
Skip that if you are willing to meet me in the first place we meet
So are beginning can lead us into the future
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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