Mike Dailey Poet Rhyme

Joe Flash's Hot Tub

If I should call and find you there
Just let me know if you are bare 
If so, don't bother getting up 
I'll just get my own damn cup 
I enjoy all outdoors 
But I don't need to see all yours. 

Mdailey  5/26/11

This was inspired by Joe's poem about sitting in his hot tub instead of inside 
working.

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Elizabeth Wesley June 22, 2011 at 4:34 PM I love the thought and the ryme but b ette still is what's below. Wld boys!

Joe Flach May 27, 2011 at 10:02 AM Just because I am bare / You need not sit and stare / There are other sites and sounds / Just take a look around / And even though you are a bloke / You can join me for a soak / First remove your clothes / Then rinse off with the hose / I keep the water clean / Come relax in the steam Mike Dailey May 27, 2011 at 1:55 PM I thank you for the offer / I shouldn't even balk / but two guys in a hot tub / I can hear the talk / And so before I disrobe / And join you in the steam / We've got to find some ladies / To sit there in between / And then we can just sit back / And get to know each other / I think you once refered to me / As a brother from another mother. Mike Dailey May 27, 2011 at 1:43 PM I think we could keep this up but folks would talk. thanks for playing along. Mike

Carol Sunshine Brown May 27, 2011 at 7:38 AM Thank you for the wonderful poetry you have posted and are sharing with us today Mike. Wishing you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 26, 2011 at 8:47 PM nice one Mike from Joe's poem .. Joe inspires many of us poets on PS.. u did a fantastic job with the wit ...hope u enjoy a happy and safe holiday weekend..

Andrea Dietrich May 26, 2011 at 7:43 PM oh, i remember seeing you use this in your comment to him. VERY good way to inspire your (a)muse!!

Dr.Ram Mehta May 26, 2011 at 6:08 PM Niced rhyming , mike