Joe

I just want you to know That I'm pathetic, Joe All my love is strife I'm like the friggin' circle of life And baby, I'm sorry But no matter what I do I just keep coming back to you

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/14/2009 2:59:00 PM

As I am sitting here reading your wonderful poetry today, I would like to thank you Jen. First I would like to thank you for writing and sharing your poetry (whether one poem or a thousand) here at PoetrySoup.Second I would like to thank you for all your kind comments to me and to all the other excellent poets also. I wish you all the best in life and in your writing endeavors in 2010. Love and blessings to all, Carol

Derrick Burton

Date: 12/13/2009 6:50:00 PM

WOW, doesn't seem pathetic just seems you are a magnet for that one person. Enjoyed this very much and have a great night. :):)