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Joyful memories of a young mom dancing, Often music blended with laughter. Always loving and beautiful, she is still. Never less than a devoted mom. Nights I fell asleep next to her twirling Endless locks of her long, brown hair. For Tammy's Acrostic on Mother's Day Contest, written 3/29/15

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Date: 4/25/2015 7:36:00 AM
awww, a lovely tribute to your mom
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Date: 4/4/2015 7:44:00 AM
What a wonderful tribute! Love the next to last line. We always feel safe enough to sleep and dream when mom is near
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Date: 4/3/2015 10:45:00 AM
The mood is set, the admiration is clear the picture painted with strokes of a loving brush.
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Date: 4/1/2015 2:46:00 PM
Hi Rhonda! Lovely poem all through, but I especially like the last two lines...they offer such a warm and tender image. gl in the contest. hugs // paul
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Date: 3/30/2015 8:42:00 AM
Very sweet poem about your dear mom, Rhonda, so full of love and admiration for her. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/30/2015 8:17:00 AM
Lovely tribute Rhonda good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/30/2015 12:21:00 AM
this is so beautiful, rhonda. simple and yet more touching to me than many I have read, I think for the personal touch at the end of it.
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Date: 3/30/2015 12:14:00 AM
Nice acrostic...I enjoyed the smooth read.
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