Joanna

He's caressing my keys, please don't tease his touch doth make every string sing For 'The Piano' contest - not placed (Joanna is rhyming slang for Pi-an-a)

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/19/2011 2:21:00 PM

wow such an inventive image! Light & Love

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/10/2011 11:38:00 AM

Oh my goodness.. I love your entry Nick.. Good luck with the sensual one... :) WN

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/7/2011 8:07:00 AM

ps Good luck in this contest. I am seeing so many awesome entries, I don't have a clue which he will pick, but he is only doing four places! GEEEZ

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/7/2011 8:06:00 AM

this is a nice sexy one here, Nick!! About my euphony line, I did it deliberately. The idea was to say that I was bringing the piano back to life and first comes the beautiful sound before the actual tune that is played. and since the poem was a crystalline, what better word to use than the word which defines a crystalline? To capture both poem and piano at once. Well, that is the strange way my mind works. Glad to see you had paid attention to the crystalline's definition! Luv ,Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/7/2011 6:40:00 AM

Very witty with deep inner meaning, Wonderful write, Nick