Jinxed

I drank from a broken mirror; every reflection since has blistered, bleeding out luck I never owned.

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Sotto Poet

Date: 5/8/2025 8:55:00 AM

Outstanding, intriguing imagery, Aaliyah. Congratulations on your win.

Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/10/2025 10:10:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind words. I’m really pleased the imagery resonated with you. I’m grateful for your support and for taking the time to share your thoughts. It means a lot to me.

Ink Empress

Date: 5/8/2025 3:58:00 AM

Dear Aaliyah, youve defined " jinxed" gracefully and in an evocative manner that would resonate with many that might have tasted the flavors of jinxed! An exquisite take on the prompt, and in few words youv delivered one that stands out! Pleasure reading, and placing this as a top winner! Thank you for sharing! Congratulations

Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/10/2025 10:09:00 AM

Thank you so much for your generous words. I’m truly honoured by your feedback and so glad the poem resonated with you. It means a great deal to me that it stood out, and I’m deeply grateful for your support. It was a pleasure to share, and I’m thankful for your kind congratulations.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/8/2025 1:54:00 AM

- Congratulations on your beautiful and sensitive micro poem, Aaliyah :) - hugs

Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/10/2025 10:08:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind words. I’m really touched by your appreciation of the poem. Your support means a lot to me. Hugs back to you.

Billie Jama

Date: 5/8/2025 1:08:00 AM

Brilliant, visceral imagery. Congratulations on your win.

Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/10/2025 10:08:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm truly honoured by your feedback, and I'm glad the imagery resonated with you. It means a great deal to me that the poem connected in such a way. I’m really grateful for your support and for taking the time to share your thoughts.