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Jingling Anklets

it was not the creaking door that scared me so, not the nightly thunder and that lonely crow, what gave me shivers was jingle of anklets, as I hid deep under cover of blankets, they passed me by across daddy’s bedroom door, like someone was pacing the grand marble floor! perhaps ghost of a dancer who comes to haunt? or was it a prank, played by my naughty aunt? I talked to my mother to share my night fears, she kissed me on my forehead and wiped my tears, that night we sprayed the floor with washing liquid, waited in my room, behind door mother hid, past midnight then no jingling anklets were heard, father heard the story and thought it absurd! problem was solved when we saw Roosevelt! the thieving neighbours cat had jingles on belt! 2nd Placement Written 14/10/2021 Something Spooky poetry contest Tania Kitchin sponsored 11 syllables each line!

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Date: 10/25/2021 10:26:00 AM
Absolutely delightful Krish - the unexplained explained but all wrapped up in the spooky and eerie with your imagination running wild! Wonderfully done. Congrats and high fives. No "cat-as-trophe" here!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/25/2021 11:50:00 AM
Sam, delighted to get your response! Thank you so much for your kindness!!:)
Date: 10/25/2021 12:14:00 AM
Very interesting story. Poetically fluent! Congratulations!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/25/2021 3:09:00 AM
Thanks Christuraj! Love your supportive words! :)
Date: 10/24/2021 2:14:00 PM
Krish, congratulations on your winning placement, your poem was spooky with a fun twist at the end, liked the creativity!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/25/2021 3:08:00 AM
Thanks Tania! Happy to be amongst the winners! glad you thought of it well!
Date: 10/24/2021 12:07:00 PM
love the twist at the end, thanks for the fab story Krish, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/24/2021 12:13:00 PM
Thanks Jan! Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 10/18/2021 6:28:00 AM
A spooky story, indeed! "perhaps ghost of a dancer who comes to haunt" - that would be my fear too! You are a perfect mother's boy - I can feel it. Enjoyed the story very much. Best wishes always ~ Mala
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/18/2021 6:35:00 AM
Thanks Mala!! Yes, in India we grew up with ghost stories! Probably true! We do not know!
Date: 10/17/2021 7:37:00 PM
Ha, ha, ha! Great teaser narrative, Krish. You really had me going. ~ Jingles and Jangles, Gershon
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/18/2021 12:01:00 AM
Thanks Gershon!! Never put jingles on cats! they like to move softly!!:)

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