Jim and Lil Part 1

Dear old Jim and Lil,
			Have caused quite a stir;
			Who would have thought,
			Their love would occur;
			You see old Jim and Lil,
			Fell in love at eighty nine;
			When at the old age home,
			Their hearts did entwine.

			Yet it's a great friendship,
			That others are trying to quell,
			Now the busybodies,
			Are trying to make their life hell;
			" They say, when we meet,
			Doors must be kept open wide -
			For heavens sake! "  says Jim,
			" We've got nothing to hide!

			But we'd sure like our privacy,
			Away from this mob,
			Who our friendship of dignity,
			Is trying to rob."
			Yes, their love has certainly,
			Caused a lot of fuss; 
			As the old gossips,
			Have nothing else to discuss.
	
			" We're only pals " cries Lil,
			In a great deal of distress;
			" It's digusting behaviour!"
			Cries frigid old Bess;
			"We're not running a brothel,
			It won't get to that stage!"
			Say's the haughty Mrs Sibson,
			Declaring the neighbours,enraged.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Johnson Avatar
December 11, 2011 at 7:06 PM
oh deer how sad but never mind, sad humans are the nasty kind, sometimes..
Dietrich Avatar
December 10, 2011 at 4:35 PM
Hey, LIzzie, who are these old people? Just fiction? I read part two first by mistake. So I came back to this one first. NOw I will go reread part two to see what is the difference. The old gossips should just leave these two alone!!
Williams Avatar
December 10, 2011 at 10:23 AM
Lizzie, God bless Jim and Lil..David
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