Jilted Lover

Got dumped, his first
His love, cursed...ouch!
Her thirst, unquenched



Any Theme Than-Bauk Poetry Contest
Sponsored by charles messina (Winner: 1st Place)
Date written and posted: 01/28/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Allison Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 3:03 PM
Ouch! many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Ibeh Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 4:39 PM
Thank you, Jan!
Devonshire Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 5:57 AM
She dumps her lover and then thirst for more victims. A disturbing but well-written poem, Edward! Congratulations on your first-place win in Charlie's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
Ibeh Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 9:09 AM
Thank you, Carolyn!:-) She's a heartbreaker alright, lol!
Dutta Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 10:29 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win top.
Ibeh Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 3:14 AM
Thank you, Anisha!
Messina Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 9:41 PM
So much said in such little words, Great write Edward, Congrats on your 1st place win..Charlie
Ibeh Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 3:13 AM
Thank you so much for placing me, Charles!:-) Most appreciated.
Salehi Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 3:06 AM
Not easy to do in this form... you did a good job.
Ibeh Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 5:16 AM
Thank you, Pashang!:-)
Gauthier Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 5:28 PM
Well done, Edward. GL
Ibeh Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 6:06 PM
Thank you very much, Line!:-)
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