JILL WILL

JILL WILL

Jill was fat and could eat no lean
Her husband Jack, was opposite
In the sea, she could float
And once capsized a boat
So was told just slim down a bit

She also had a kid named Jack
And Jill was a cook and a mum
But sometimes was worried
When meals were hurried
Fearing he’d choke on a plum

Jill carried some extra weight
And unlike Jack, she was slow
She wasn’t that quick
Often missing a trick
He was much nimbler, you know

One time, they went up the hill
Together, but at a slow pace
She stumbled and fell
It really hurt like hell
And got mud all over her face

But at least Jill was also famous
Both featured in nursery rhymes
Slightly fatter than him
But was pictured as slim
As is the fashion in these times
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 11:24 AM
These are really good. Congrats to you.
Messina Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 1:49 AM
I really enjoyed reading this one, Howard. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Thanks for entering...Charlie
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