Balasubramaniyan Venkataramani Poet Rhyme

Jill

Jill jerked into a pool,                                                                                     The water was certainly cool,                                                                                   She had no tool,                                                                                              She felt like a fool,                                                        
Wiped chill by wool,                                                                                          And she sat near the shool.

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Andrea Dietrich November 22, 2024 at 11:35 AM Congrats in the contest Balasubramaniyan Venkataramani November 23, 2024 at 3:25 AM Thank you Andrea . your wish may bring more success in my life.yours loving friend, veebee

Charles Messina November 18, 2024 at 2:53 AM Thanks for entering my contest, Bala. Congrats on your placement. Charlie Balasubramaniyan Venkataramani November 18, 2024 at 9:56 AM Dear bro Charlie, Thank you very much.Your words make me to do different in the world of poetry in future.I hope that the placement will be continued.Yours,Bala.