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Jill

Jill jerked into a pool, Water was certainly cool, He felt like a fool , Run away had no rule , Wiped chill by wool, And sat near the shool.

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Date: 11/22/2024 11:35:00 AM
Congrats in the contest
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Balasubramaniyan Venkataramani
Date: 11/23/2024 3:25:00 AM
Thank you Andrea . your wish may bring more success in my life.yours loving friend, veebee
Date: 11/18/2024 2:53:00 AM
Thanks for entering my contest, Bala. Congrats on your placement. Charlie
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Balasubramaniyan Venkataramani
Date: 11/18/2024 9:56:00 AM
Dear bro Charlie, Thank you very much.Your words make me to do different in the world of poetry in future.I hope that the placement will be continued.Yours,Bala.

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