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Jewels of the Sea

Dawn’s sunrise with the ocean tide low reveals new shells, like jewels aglow Mollusk’s homes recently vacated just waiting to be excavated Shapes and size of wide variety laid out as far as the eye can see Rolling waves will soon come to reclaim these low-tide jewels of ocean fame
by, Joe Flach for nette onclaud's PARALLELOGRAM DE CRYSTALLINE contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/29/2012 4:00:00 PM
a great poem! i love the flow of it and the rhyme. beautiful imagery, too!
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Date: 2/29/2012 1:21:00 PM
I might not know a "parallelogram de crystalline," Joe, but I do know when I enjoy reading a poem. We see these jewels on the beach often. Tiny coquina shells come in many colors, but most of the others that make it to shore are broken. Thank you for creating this "jewel." Wishing you success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/29/2012 4:08:00 AM
Lovely written Joe, a short visit to read yours last poem today and I am glad I did it. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/28/2012 8:57:00 PM
this one is very enjoyable to read. I haven't seen many others yet, but I sure like this one.
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