Gary Smith Poet Rhyme

Jewels of the Ocean

Among the seagrass, slow they canter

Darling steeds of the sea,

Days spent anchored to a frond

Or currents shape their destiny.

Gentle creatures, captivating

Hypnotic in their motion.

Seahorses, they hold us rapt

Little jewels, of the ocean.









Entry for
SEAHORSES - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Julia Ward.
24/4/20158

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Julia Ward May 9, 2018 at 12:44 AM Well thought out, Gary. Well done for your poem doing so well in my contest. Gary Smith May 9, 2018 at 4:44 PM Thank you Julia :)

Line Gauthier May 8, 2018 at 11:05 PM Congrats on your win, Gary, with this lovely poem. Gary Smith May 9, 2018 at 4:45 PM Thank you Line :)

Susan Gentry May 8, 2018 at 10:17 PM Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed. Gary Smith May 9, 2018 at 4:45 PM Thanks Susan :)

Eve Roper May 8, 2018 at 7:30 PM Gary, congratulations on this wonderful write.. Hugs Gary Smith May 9, 2018 at 4:45 PM Thank you Eve :)

Kim Rodrigues April 28, 2018 at 8:39 AM You slow down the motion for us and give us hypnotic imagery! Well done, Gary! Gary Smith April 28, 2018 at 10:44 AM Thank you Kim :)

Heidi Sands April 25, 2018 at 5:02 PM Sweet one Gary :) Gary Smith April 25, 2018 at 5:16 PM Thank you Heidi :)

FJ Thomas April 25, 2018 at 12:22 PM You've written such a light-hearted piece Gary. Enjoyed this :) Gary Smith April 25, 2018 at 2:15 PM Thank you F.J. :)