Jewels

My love's not passive, shy and free of strife
Nor are her eyes soft deep and limpid pools
No, in those orbs there burns the fire of life
Of value more than any precious jewels


ARBITRIUM DIVISA POEM
19 July 2019

Taken from poem: Birthday Sonnet (submitted 2017)
Contest sponsor: Gregory R Barden
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Marcum Wong Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 6:30 PM
Gorgeous Geoffrey! A worthy winner! Congratulations my friend! xxoo : )
Dietrich Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 7:41 PM
she is FIERY!! Awesome, Geoffrey. And congrats on the win
Ashley Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 8:03 PM
I love the spirit of your poem, Geoffrey. Your beautiful imagery glides on the smooth rhythm and passion of this piece. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Blown Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 11:14 PM
nice write...have to admit though, that title made me think quentin tarentino and pulp fiction
Brewer Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 4:27 AM
A striking, memorable film with pleasing lack of sentimentality. Thanks for your comment.
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