Jewelled Flight

flitting vibration
iridescent turquoise gleam
    savouring nectar


         16/08/18


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Gauthier Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 3:59 PM
A lovely tribute to hummingbirds, Wendy.
Watson Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 4:01 PM
Thank you, Line. Sadly not flitting around my part of the world!
Cunningham Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 3:34 PM
Lovely haiku Wendy, were you by any chance going on holiday when you wrote this ? Congratulations. Tom
Cunningham Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 12:48 AM
Oh yes of course, I was a bit off track. Been a long day lol.
Watson Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 3:37 PM
Thank you Tom. No, just perusing pictures of hummingbirds!!
Dietrich Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 3:19 PM
ahh back again.. to say congrats this time!
Watson Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 3:38 PM
That's so kind of you, Andrea. What a shame I shall probably never see a hummingbird in real life!
Canerdy Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 4:11 PM
Superb, Wendy! Janice
Watson Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 3:38 PM
Thank you so much Janice for your encouraging words.
Dietrich Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 7:29 PM
Wonderful!
One Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 3:16 PM
Love your use of words here..
Watson Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 3:39 PM
I'm encouraged by your comments. Thank you so much.
Ashley Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 4:13 PM
A simply beautiful haiku, Wendy.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Watson Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 3:40 PM
What a lovely comment. Thank you for your continued encouragement, Susan.
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