Jeweled

Created for Linda-Marie Bariana’s contest

1.  You are a Poetry Book .... "The Wanderings of My Mind"
2.  My Poetry Book contains poems about _____The human condition
3.  My favorite poem in my Poetry Book is in SENRYU FORM and it reads as follows: 

You really are cute
Wearing your expensive loot
In your birthday suit
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 1:49 PM
haha. LIke me, it seems you took this contest very "literally" a fun one, Congratulations.
Brown Avatar
April 15, 2010 at 6:48 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda's contest Robb. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
April 14, 2010 at 7:23 AM
Congrats on the win
Freeman Avatar
April 12, 2010 at 5:35 PM
Congratulations Robb on a nice job and poem in a worthy place. Agape, Moses
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April 12, 2010 at 1:37 PM
Got a chuckle out of this one. Congratulations being one of the winners in Linda-Marie's contest. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
Kopp Avatar
April 12, 2010 at 11:22 AM
Yeah! Great job in the contest!
White Avatar
April 12, 2010 at 1:59 AM
Quite a picture you have created here- Congrats on your win Robb
Sweetheart Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 7:53 PM
Congrats Robb on your 10th place win in my Poetry Book contest... a unique write and format that fit the contest criteria..thankxxx for your support...luv.. Linda-Marie
Mehta Avatar
April 8, 2010 at 9:30 PM
Good luck in the contest. very cute
Henderson Avatar
April 8, 2010 at 4:06 PM
You had me primed for something so serious until I read the last three lines, and then I had a big laugh. A good one! Carolyn Henderson
Muzzey Avatar
April 8, 2010 at 3:15 PM
Love it! I want to read more of your book, good luck in the contest. Caryl
Kopp Avatar
April 8, 2010 at 2:58 PM
Lol. Too funny.
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