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Jewel of Dawn

stunned amazed heavy fog enveloped when can my jewel appreared my hope await ornament coolish drops clear choice ripple of soft cold persuade patience my smile danced saw jewel rays silver hacked nosedive expanse of sky illuminating earth welcome jewel dawn tucked new hope let me be your lover jewel of dawn ~ sukmawati komala ~ 2013 february 28

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/3/2013 4:11:00 PM

You sure do create a lot of gems with your words. this is another of your crowing jewels!

Tim Ryerson

Date: 3/2/2013 4:31:00 AM

I too am 'stunned, amazed'...stunned and amazed by the beauty of this verse...'ripple of soft cold'...what a line, what a poem...Have a blessed day dearest friend - Tim

Scott Howard Myers The Gypsy King

Date: 3/1/2013 8:34:00 AM

My favorite part of the day.....thanks for sharing. Scott

Len Gasun

Date: 2/28/2013 10:28:00 AM

Hello my dearest friend! so happy to stop by and read this so sweet and awesome write of yours. I love it and I'll fav. this one! Thank you so much my dear SK. Big hugs to you! love always, Leonora