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Jewel of Dawn

stunned 
amazed

heavy fog 
enveloped 

 when can
my jewel appreared
my  hope
await 
ornament coolish drops 

clear choice
ripple of soft cold 
persuade patience

my smile danced
saw
 jewel rays
silver hacked nosedive 
expanse of 
sky illuminating earth 

welcome 
jewel dawn 
tucked 
new hope

let me be 
your lover

 jewel of dawn 

~ sukmawati komala ~ 
2013 february 28

Copyright © Sukmawati Komala | Year Posted 2013

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/3/2013 4:11:00 PM You sure do create a lot of gems with your words. this is another of your crowing jewels! Login to Reply

Tim Ryerson Date: 3/2/2013 4:31:00 AM I too am 'stunned, amazed'...stunned and amazed by the beauty of this verse...'ripple of soft cold'...what a line, what a poem...Have a blessed day dearest friend - Tim Login to Reply

Scott Howard Myers The Gypsy King Date: 3/1/2013 8:34:00 AM My favorite part of the day.....thanks for sharing. Scott Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 2/28/2013 10:28:00 AM Hello my dearest friend! so happy to stop by and read this so sweet and awesome write of yours. I love it and I'll fav. this one! Thank you so much my dear SK. Big hugs to you! love always, Leonora Login to Reply