Jesus

Jesus
our savior
shining light of the world
cleansing us with your precious blood
for sin

jesuscinquain

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Jack Horne

July 10, 2016 at 4:10 PM

beautiful write, my friend. hope you are doing well & having a great week x

Andrea Dietrich

June 24, 2016 at 10:00 PM

just seeing your reply to me here. I got a student to upload (download?) an APP for voice recorder on my smart phone. I don't know anything about my smart phone but at least I can now record my voice and email the recordings to myself. My friend converts them to MR3 for me. My student says he can find another recorder that will already be MP3 and then I won't have to convert. Look for MP3!!!

Jack Horne

June 12, 2016 at 12:14 PM

beautiful write indeed, my friend. i hope you are well & having a relaxing weekend x

Phyllis Babcock

June 16, 2016 at 10:50 PM

Hi Jack. Thanks for your comment. Just getting ready for 2 weeks of babysitting my grandson.Lots of play time. lol. love phyl

Andrea Dietrich

June 9, 2016 at 6:28 PM

Nicely done, in this form, Phyllis. Sure hope you can figure out the recording . Would love to hear your voice. I will be putting up a limerick story within a week that Nikko helped me convert to MP3

Phyllis Babcock

June 16, 2016 at 10:52 PM

I guess I will need a microphone to do it. My son said he will have a look and see what I need. Hopefully soon so I can get one recorded. thanks Andrea. love phyl