Dawn Quering Poet I do not know?

Jessica

You have left me:
Happy, spiritual, able to fly
Invincible, numb, light as a feather
Ready for the world, gracious, someone new
Generous, shaded, needed, loved
Rejuvinated, bathed, reborn, cherished
Wanted, held, comforted, warm,great...
 
You have left me:
Broke, ugly, smelly,mean
A criminal, hated, feared
Unwanted, miserable, homeless
Childless, lifeless, in the cold
With nothing, Scared, heartless
Careless, meaningless, hurting
Shacking, sick, ill, undeniable pain...

How can 1 thing
1 single thing make you feel so good yet so bad

Heroin
Most of all
You have left me dead

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K K Iloduba Jnr September 9, 2009 at 3:32 PM they ve to leave sometimes..............making us better mortals.i luv d way u painted it.

Carol Sunshine Brown September 9, 2009 at 5:08 AM Thank you for sharing your fasinating poetry with us today Dawn. I wish you the best with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

Mohamad Fawaz September 8, 2009 at 8:32 PM Well contemplated and nicely written, but I dislike the question beginning with "how" at the end.

Nadia Shahwan September 8, 2009 at 10:50 AM Out of the ordinary.