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Jerome, the Starfish: a Nursery Rhyme

A little red starfish was just as cute as he could be. lived on the bottom of the deepest part of the sea, but he was very unhappy in his dark watery home. He wanted to be a cowboy; his name was Jerome. He found some seaweed and with it he made a rope that he needed to catch a seahorse. It was his only hope, but seahorses swim very fast and Jerome was slow so he found one sleeping when the tide was very low. He rode on his horse's back for most of the day, acting like a real cowboy. It was so much fun to play. When he got home, he told his Mom about the ride and she laughed at his story with her eyes open wide. His Mom said that was neat, and it was time to eat. She gave him a shrimp then Jerome had a special treat. When he told his baby brother that he had a horse Little brother wanted one, and Jerome said, "Of course!" Two little cowboys rode their horses from shore to shore across giant waves and sandy bottom of the sea floor. It was the game they never ever got tired of playing so Jerome decided in the sea he would be staying. March 14, 2021 Nursery Rhyme 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Eve Roper

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Date: 3/21/2021 5:33:00 PM
this is absolutely charming Jenna a beautiful rhyme, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/20/2021 9:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Jenna, in my Nursery Rhyme2 contest. A great story for little children. Please visit my blog on the contest . Nursery Rhyme 2 Contest. - Eve Roper's Blog (poetrysoup.com) Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/20/2021 12:21:00 PM
Just plain charming Jenna! A great story told with your signature creativity. Congratulations. All the best!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/20/2021 4:09:00 PM
aww what sweet compliments, Sam. Thanks ever so much.
Date: 3/20/2021 10:38:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Jenna ... kids will love it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/20/2021 4:08:00 PM
Thanks a bunch, Anne-Lise.
Date: 3/17/2021 7:14:00 PM
That was awesome! Great rhyme, kids will absolutely love the starfish cowboy!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/20/2021 10:15:00 AM
Thank you, Mark. I've become as enamored with writing them as you seem to have become. Such fun!
Date: 3/16/2021 11:21:00 AM
This is such a delightful read, Jenna:-) Best of luck in Eve's contest!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/16/2021 12:34:00 PM
Hi Edward and I’m so happy you like it. Thanks
Date: 3/15/2021 5:44:00 AM
I think children would love hearing this rhyme, Jenna. You created likeable characters to whom kids can relate and I think most of them would light up at the thought of riding a sea horse. Imaginative and clever! Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/15/2021 9:20:00 AM
Thank you! Those are such nice complments,Carolyn.
Date: 3/15/2021 3:35:00 AM
You've cracked these Jenna, you should get them published, kids would love them. Have a great week. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/15/2021 9:17:00 AM
Thanks for such kind comments,Tom. They’re so much fun to create!
Date: 3/15/2021 12:45:00 AM
Simply loveable nursery rhyme. Pity I never saw a sea horse. Best for a win.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/15/2021 9:16:00 AM
Oh Victor, they are amazing! Thank you for liking this one.

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