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Jemima

My best friend, Jemima She’s in my class at school She’s not especially pretty She’s not what you’d call cool She can’t spell words for toffee She always gets in late She’s never got a pencil, but Jemima’s my best mate

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/21/2009 6:54:00 AM
A lovely portrayal of your "best mate," John. We miss out on a lot when we judge people by their appearances and their abilities to seem "cool" in the eyes of others. You took a deeper look at Jemima and obviously found a trusted and beloved friend. Very nice! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/21/2009 5:13:00 AM
something unidentifiable about friendship. it's great. -Robert
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Date: 11/21/2009 5:10:00 AM
Sound's like Jemima is a direct opposite to you. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 11/21/2009 2:04:00 AM
Short and sweet nice write. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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