Jelly Fish

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Jelly fish's transparency Clear as day Watch out for that sting Enchanting, fascinating Persistent, stubborn Single-minded One-purposed life Self Self-preservation Zealous as he pumps Through ocean waters Committed to survival No yours Not mine His

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/21/2024 7:48:00 PM

We stepped into the Caribbean on Royal Caribbean’s private beach and were surrounded by jelly fish, backed out very quickly…lol

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/22/2024 4:27:00 AM

Oh, whoa~~ That could have been painful or even could have meant your demise and I am so glad that you backed out. Your visits are appreciated. Sara K

Silent One

Date: 1/20/2024 7:08:00 AM

Ohh I like this one and that ending is deep... (like the ocean)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/20/2024 7:20:00 AM

Just don't marry a jellyfish or get involved with one, SO. Thanks for seeing the deep, deep side. Sara K

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/19/2024 7:36:00 PM

Oh wow, dear Sara, this is such an intriguing write about Jelly Fish. They are really fascinating creatures and I consider the marine world to be so charismatic.. With its turquoise hues and sea-residents which are like magical elements.. I absolutely enjoyed reading this one, it has a beautiful mermaid-land touch.. Your wordplay is so wonderful too, sending many best wishes & light.. Keep writing and shining.. :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/19/2024 9:56:00 PM

Why, thank you, Hiya. I hope that I can write as long as I continue to live. Thanks for the time spent here and for the nice review of my work. Sara K