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Juice of succulent fruit Jellied and put into Jars is not the same as Jam, and that’s because it’s Jiggly like the way that Jolly Saint Nick shakes his Jelly belly laughing! Written March 3, 2017 for Kim Merryman's Pleiades J Poetry Contest

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Date: 3/8/2017 9:06:00 PM
Hi Andrea , Congratulations on your fine win:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/8/2017 2:23:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. Jolly jiggles you have in there.
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Date: 3/8/2017 7:17:00 AM
Jam or conserve? And a winner too! :)Well done. Now about immortality. My own problem with it is that folk will live long enough to see all the stuff they have achieved, break again. That whole cyclic phenomenon where all the old ideas eventually come back into vogue, and us old folk remember their faults. I believe death is an exit from the cycle, our only way to lasting peace.
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Date: 3/8/2017 6:30:00 AM
Yet another masterpiece from a role model. This is just awwwwwwww... What a beautiful share...
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Date: 3/8/2017 3:42:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/8/2017 2:18:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/7/2017 11:11:00 PM
LOL, I LOVE this one :D Congratulations Andrea!
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Date: 3/7/2017 8:41:00 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 3/7/2017 8:34:00 PM
Congrats, Andrea!
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Date: 3/7/2017 8:30:00 PM
Back with Congratulations Andy!! Big Hugggs and love. deb
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Date: 3/7/2017 8:22:00 PM
I think this is very well done for the letter j. Flows smoothly too. Congratulations. Watch out for k.
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Date: 3/7/2017 6:48:00 PM
Nicely done , :-) congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Date: 3/7/2017 5:58:00 PM
Love the fun humor in your great Jelly Pleiades poem, Andrea! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 3/7/2017 5:11:00 PM
Andrea, this is so light-hearted and cute! Congrats on your 3rd place win! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 3/6/2017 7:08:00 PM
How cute Andrea, I prefer preserves. Just fruit, water and sugar.
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Date: 3/6/2017 12:21:00 PM
Juice and sugar and God knows what. :) You're guaranteed a jiggly butt. So spoon it up and spread it thick. I've eaten plenty and never got sick.
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Date: 3/6/2017 8:41:00 AM
Love the jelly belly line :-)...Nicely penned Andrea..
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Date: 3/6/2017 5:06:00 AM
Your entry has that cute factor Andrea! I hope it does real well! It made me smile and giggle. GL...7 : )
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Date: 3/5/2017 8:06:00 PM
Delightful! And Jan's cracking me up (her box caught my eye.) Very cute ... CayCay
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Date: 3/5/2017 7:02:00 PM
Jumping jellybeans I feel I like could just eat a bowl of jelly and ice cream lol:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/5/2017 6:29:00 PM
I felt jubilant when I tasted your Jelly... Good luck..
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Date: 3/5/2017 5:30:00 PM
LOL, love the visuals this one creates
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Date: 3/5/2017 4:15:00 PM
Good job, Andrea. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 3/5/2017 3:51:00 PM
Joint was smoking when I jumped into this jealous fallacy that jubilantly disappeared after having jumped into much disparity while in court being a jester at large whose job was to make sure everyone was judged guilty.
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Date: 3/5/2017 1:30:00 PM
Such a cute poem, Andrea! (I have a jelly belly too. LOL) You're so creative. Wishing you success in Kim's contest.
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