Sushma A. Singh Poet Verse

Jeers

Jibes flew across as sharp
         jutting arrows  stabbing
jolts chilling  blood curdling 
        jarred sensibilities
Juxtaposed between sects
       jagged edged racial slurs 
jettisoned global peace


Contest Pleiades J
Six syllables in each line
date 4th March 2017

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Janice Canerdy March 9, 2017 at 3:53 PM Powerful piece, Sushma. A 7 for your winning entry! Janice Sushma A. Singh March 9, 2017 at 10:58 PM Thank you, Janice!

Anne-Lise Andresen March 8, 2017 at 2:16 AM - Congratulations on your win, Sushma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sushma A. Singh March 8, 2017 at 9:20 AM Thank you!

Joseph May March 7, 2017 at 8:39 PM Congrats on your win Sushma Sushma A. Singh March 8, 2017 at 9:20 AM Thanks!

Kim Rodrigues March 7, 2017 at 8:31 PM Congrats! Sushma A. Singh March 8, 2017 at 9:22 AM Thank you Sushma A. Singh March 8, 2017 at 9:21 AM Thank you

Eve Roper March 7, 2017 at 7:49 PM Very nice, Sushma, congratulations on your win hugs Eve Sushma A. Singh March 8, 2017 at 9:21 AM Thank you!

Laura Leiser March 7, 2017 at 5:56 PM Wow, this is really good, Sushma...great use of J words to describe Jeers! Congrats on your win :) Sushma A. Singh March 8, 2017 at 6:51 AM Thanks, Laura

Kim Merryman March 7, 2017 at 5:04 PM Sushma, powerful and hard-hitting words! Well done! Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings, Kim Sushma A. Singh March 8, 2017 at 6:00 AM Thanks, Kim

Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2017 at 5:19 AM - A great pleiades, Sushma :) - Well done - (A difficult letter) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sushma A. Singh March 5, 2017 at 6:50 AM Thanks Anne for your ever prompt wishes! :)