Jeers

Jibes flew across as sharp jutting arrows stabbing jolts chilling blood curdling jarred sensibilities Juxtaposed between sects jagged edged racial slurs jettisoned global peace Contest Pleiades J Six syllables in each line date 4th March 2017

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/9/2017 3:53:00 PM

Powerful piece, Sushma. A 7 for your winning entry! Janice

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 3/9/2017 10:58:00 PM

Thank you, Janice!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/8/2017 2:16:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Sushma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 3/8/2017 9:20:00 AM

Thank you!

Joseph May

Date: 3/7/2017 8:39:00 PM

Congrats on your win Sushma

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 3/8/2017 9:20:00 AM

Thanks!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/7/2017 8:31:00 PM

Congrats!

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 3/8/2017 9:22:00 AM

Thank you

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 3/8/2017 9:21:00 AM

Thank you

Eve Roper

Date: 3/7/2017 7:49:00 PM

Very nice, Sushma, congratulations on your win hugs Eve

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 3/8/2017 9:21:00 AM

Thank you!

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/7/2017 5:56:00 PM

Wow, this is really good, Sushma...great use of J words to describe Jeers! Congrats on your win :)

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 3/8/2017 6:51:00 AM

Thanks, Laura

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/7/2017 5:04:00 PM

Sushma, powerful and hard-hitting words! Well done! Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings, Kim

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 3/8/2017 6:00:00 AM

Thanks, Kim

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/5/2017 5:19:00 AM

- A great pleiades, Sushma :) - Well done - (A difficult letter) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 3/5/2017 6:50:00 AM

Thanks Anne for your ever prompt wishes! :)