Jealous Jill
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I wrote this poem originally several months back ago, however for this contest I changed the title and reworked a line or two.
Jealous Jill
Jack and Jill went up the hill
it should have been a good time still.
Jill, though was really jealous
and she was feeling zealous,
so she went to her lawyer with a sad song.
She complained about it not being fair
that Jack had was the era
and she should have his crown.
So the lawyer filed in the court
and Jack got the report,
That Jill was after his crown.
Copyright © Miranda Hawley | Year Posted 2024
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