I wrote this poem originally several months back ago, however for this contest I changed the title and reworked a line or two.
Jealous Jill Jack and Jill went up the hill it should have been a good time still. Jill, though was really jealous and she was feeling zealous, so she went to her lawyer with a sad song. She complained about it not being fair that Jack had was the era and she should have his crown. So the lawyer filed in the court and Jack got the report, That Jill was after his crown.
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