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I wrote this poem originally several months back ago, however for this contest I changed the title and reworked a line or two.

Jealous Jill
Jack and Jill went up the hill it should have been a good time still. Jill, though was really jealous and she was feeling zealous, so she went to her lawyer with a sad song. She complained about it not being fair that Jack had was the era and she should have his crown. So the lawyer filed in the court and Jack got the report, That Jill was after his crown.

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Date: 11/22/2024 11:28:00 AM
This is fun humor, Miranda. Big congrats here
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Date: 11/18/2024 2:15:00 AM
A fun read, Miranda. I saw your note about you writing this several months ago...Thanks for rewriting it for my contest. Congratulations on your winning placement...Charlie
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Date: 11/5/2024 12:15:00 PM
When Jack first heard the news, that his crown he's about to lose, he pushed Jill, down the hill, leaving her battered and bruised.
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 11/5/2024 2:34:00 PM
Yes, that is a likely response from Jack. The fighting began.

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