Jealous Eyes

They jealousy can only amount 
as far as their vision go
therefore, never let road blocks 
& obstacles stop you.
Your bound to fulfilling your 
dreams don't let opposite 
optimism stop you.
You feel the hatred in the vibe 
& taste the awkward irony, you 
can almost physically feel
Their spiritual negligence 
towards you.
Although your actions may not 
be so great, just make sure 
your ambition & notions are 
accurate.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 18, 2012 at 3:12 AM
congratulations on your win :)
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January 18, 2012 at 8:40 AM
thank you :) I appreciate it
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January 17, 2012 at 5:38 PM
Interesting write not an ABC form. Keep writing! Light & Love
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January 18, 2012 at 8:41 AM
Thanks, I didn't quite know what was ABC
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January 17, 2012 at 4:52 PM
enjoyed this one keep them coming
Ellis Avatar
January 17, 2012 at 12:24 PM
Very important message, well articulated. The ending of this poem was fabulous. The message is well understood by this reader.
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January 17, 2012 at 6:39 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week A. Love, Carol
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January 17, 2012 at 6:32 AM
Love the poem...so true and a nice way to convey such feelings and top-notch. Thank you
Rosario Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 8:42 AM
Thanks to you for reading
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