Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

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Jackass is a donkey or a fool. Hopefully no one is offended!

Jealous

Jabbers on endlessly
Jawbone puppet with string
Jaded with raging sin
Jumps over fellow man
Jail of his own lone truth
Jagged bone cuts his fate
Jackass jealous – no use

3/4/2017
Pleiades J

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Paul Callus March 10, 2017 at 3:26 PM I say better a jackass than a jealous jackass:) Congratulations on this fine win, Kim! Regards // paul Kim Rodrigues March 10, 2017 at 4:37 PM Thanks, Paul!

Agnes Krampe March 8, 2017 at 9:29 PM Congrats on your win, Kim. Kim Rodrigues March 8, 2017 at 9:40 PM Thank you, Agnes!

Sushma A. Singh March 8, 2017 at 6:58 AM Congrats on your win, Kim! Kim Rodrigues March 8, 2017 at 9:39 PM Thank you, Sushma!

Anne-Lise Andresen March 8, 2017 at 2:11 AM - Congratulations on your win, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kim Rodrigues March 8, 2017 at 9:39 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise! xo

Darren White March 7, 2017 at 11:20 PM Hah, very good one. Jealousy is awful. Congratulations :) Kim Rodrigues March 8, 2017 at 9:39 PM Thank you, Darren!

Kim Merryman March 7, 2017 at 9:27 PM Jealousy causes nothing but grief. Well done, Kim! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim Kim Rodrigues March 8, 2017 at 9:38 PM Thank you, Kim :)

Janice Canerdy March 7, 2017 at 9:10 PM I'm back to say congrats, Kim! Janice Kim Rodrigues March 7, 2017 at 9:13 PM Thanks, Janice!

Joseph May March 7, 2017 at 8:53 PM Congrats on your win Kim Kim Rodrigues March 7, 2017 at 8:59 PM Thanks, Joseph!

Deborah Burch March 7, 2017 at 8:33 PM Congratulations Kim!! Big Hugggs deb Kim Rodrigues March 7, 2017 at 8:35 PM Thank you, Deb! Kim Rodrigues March 7, 2017 at 8:34 PM Thank you, Deb!

Scarlett Hanley March 6, 2017 at 8:00 PM It seems like you stepped out of your comfort zone? And did it well too? Applause to you. Kim Rodrigues March 6, 2017 at 8:40 PM Thanks so much, Scarlett!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 5, 2017 at 10:40 AM Excellent Pleiades, Kim! You found a clever way to tackle the 'J', and I love the last line! Lots of luck...hugs, Rhonda Kim Rodrigues March 5, 2017 at 11:27 AM Thanks so much, Rhonda!

Probir Gupta March 5, 2017 at 6:29 AM Great J pleiades ... All the J's put to very good use! ... GL ... Kim Rodrigues March 5, 2017 at 6:31 AM Thank you, my friend! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2017 at 4:03 AM - A great pleiades, Kim :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kim Rodrigues March 5, 2017 at 6:01 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Janice Canerdy March 4, 2017 at 8:59 PM Powerful, pulls no punches, good job, Jan--a 7! Janice Kim Rodrigues March 4, 2017 at 10:00 PM Thanks, Jan! :) Janice Canerdy March 4, 2017 at 9:05 PM Make that KIM! I'm sorry! Janice

Joseph May March 4, 2017 at 3:23 PM Nicely penned Kim...GL in the contest Kim Rodrigues March 4, 2017 at 3:47 PM Thank you, Joseph!