Jaundiced

Slightly yellow I
Awaken in an ice bath
Without kidneys.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 10, 2015 at 12:22 PM
Uwe, lol, this reminds me of Charlie the unicorn. Who woke up with no kidney... It's a cartoon... He wakes and yells.. "Hey Someone took my kidney." LOL... on a not laughing matter. It is a dark side on the underground market. Jaundice is not good...SKAT
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November 25, 2014 at 8:20 AM
A Lovely poem. I'm refreshed reading through your lines.Thanks for the share. Definitely a 7
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November 13, 2014 at 6:15 AM
I was shocked by the last line . . . but then thought . . . that was the whole point of the poem -- nicely done, I love surprised ending and the yellow and ice set me for your powerful finish!
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